Chicken Haiku

Turning over the earth,
experiencing(5 syllables?) with beak
oh look juicy worm!

Very nice. I'm no poetry expert, but I think your first line has 6 syllables? I propose an easy fix...

Turning over earth (5)
experiencing with beak (7)
oh look juicy worm! (5)
 
Thank you.
I dealt with a broody last year... she didn't peck, but, boy, would she puff up and squeal!

Inspired by your description....

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Broody hen on nest
puffing up and squawks at me
protecting her eggs
 

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