I'm guessing the card is on the Black Red correct?
If so, there a few issues you have going on:
First, I think the bird looks really nice. I have plenty just like him.
However that said, you have two important issues to consider (forget the shafting comment completely; it's not even to be remotely considered compared to the other two issues which are far more important):
1. The bird is the wrong color. The hackles is suppose to shade to a bright flashes golden.
There are lots of variations within Black Reds. This is a very dark coloration where the hackle is the same color throughout. It's not suppose to be that way. Breed him to a very light hackled hen.
2. You have white in the tail which is only going to increase as the bird ages.
By the time this bird is 1 to 1 1/2 years old that white will reach half way down that tail feather. Many of us have this. It is a very set trait in Cubalayas because of their game ancestry. Make sure you breed him to a hen with no white at all in the tail.
I see nothing wrong with his type: which is the most important thing.
Do not take my comments offensively. I have plenty of birds that will match this one to a tee. I am just trying to help you for the future.