Daily Writing Prompt Thread Thingy It'll Be Fun

[NC_Quail]

This was really good! I love the concept.


IS THIS WHO I THINK IT IS—

Thank you!

 

[NC_Quail]

I’m rusty
“I may not be human anymore, but I’m not stupid. Don’t lie to me.”

“Oh please! You left us! You left us all for dead in that god forsaken house!” (Child)

“I did what I had to!”

The child shook her head, closing her eyes as tears threatened to slip past. “No! No you didn’t! You did what was best for you! And then you became one of… them.”

“You don’t know the whole story.”

“What I know is enough. You don’t deserve the truth.” The child backed away, to the others watching. “Don’t come back. Like you said, you aren’t human.”

“No! You don’t understand! It was for us! For you, me, your siblings! Please just listen.

The child ignored her pleas, tucking herself into the crowd of people, staring at the monster in disgust.

“Wait. Don’t do this. I might have left you but it wasn’t permanent! I came back!”

A man scowled, “It’s too late.” He told her gruffly.

“I’m sorry!”

I forgot to comment on this yesterday but I wanted to say that I thought this was really good! The dialogue really builds suspense.

 

[TesoroSena]

I forgot to comment on this yesterday but I wanted to say that I thought this was really good! The dialogue really builds suspense.

Aww thank you
Yall are crazy talented though I could never

 

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IS THIS WHO I THINK IT IS—

I was gonna say…
AND IF SO THATS SO COOL

You know it is

 

[_-Captain BRM-_]

You know it is

okay.

 

[Isabella7Storm5]

You know it is

*starts breathing louder*

 

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IS THIS WHO I THINK IT IS?

…maaayyybbeee?
*chuckels*
He can be savage

I'm loving this guy more and more every time I read another one of his scenes

 

[_-Captain BRM-_]

I'm loving thiss guy more and more every time I read another one of his scenes

okay.

 

[-Shade-]

okay.

What's that supposed to mean?

 

[-Shade-]

okay.

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Did I do something wrong?