Eroica
Defective
I was thinking I had to go and make something new, and procrastinating about it because I have to do A TON of other work, but I came across this lovely thing from an old version of my story.Today's Prompt: Music. This can be anywhere from a character listening to or making their own music. They can even be finding the musical rhythm in nature.
I love music. Music is my life, and I love to incorporate it into everything I do.
She took another deep breath, preparing herself to sing to them. Her daughter pressed something on her datapad, and music started playing. It was a very recognizable melody—one that ------ could certainly remember, even for the rest of her life.
A thrill rippled through the crowd. All were silent now, mesmerized. The Mistress picked up the melody again, and the people all joined in.
“Out of dark, out of doubt, to the day’s arising,”
“Out of dark, out of doubt, to the day’s arising,”
“Comes Liberty, her sword unsheathing,”
“Comes Liberty, her sword unsheathing,”
“To cut men free from bondage chain,”
“To cut men free from bondage chain,”
“That Freedom may come forever to reign.”
“That Freedom may come forever to reign.”
And the music got quieter once more, swelling again to reach its grand finale. It seemed that the place was filled with the song, filled with the light of it. The Cave of Columns was practically vibrating now, and ------ threw her entire self into this final repetition.
And like that, the music died away, faded into silence. But the vibration still remained; it had not passed away. Perhaps it never would, a final, lasting testimony to freedom when all hope was lost.
“Out of dark, out of doubt, to the day’s arising
Comes Liberty, her sword unsheathing
To cut men free from bondage chain
That Freedom may come forever to reign.”
Comes Liberty, her sword unsheathing
To cut men free from bondage chain
That Freedom may come forever to reign.”
A thrill rippled through the crowd. All were silent now, mesmerized. The Mistress picked up the melody again, and the people all joined in.
“Out of dark, out of doubt, to the day’s arising,”
“Out of dark, out of doubt, to the day’s arising,”
“Comes Liberty, her sword unsheathing,”
“Comes Liberty, her sword unsheathing,”
“To cut men free from bondage chain,”
“To cut men free from bondage chain,”
“That Freedom may come forever to reign.”
“That Freedom may come forever to reign.”
And the music got quieter once more, swelling again to reach its grand finale. It seemed that the place was filled with the song, filled with the light of it. The Cave of Columns was practically vibrating now, and ------ threw her entire self into this final repetition.
“Out of dark, out of doubt, to the day’s arising
Comes Liberty, her sword unsheathing
To cut men free from bondage chain
That Freedom may come forever…
forever…
forever….
to reign.”
Comes Liberty, her sword unsheathing
To cut men free from bondage chain
That Freedom may come forever…
forever…
forever….
to reign.”
And like that, the music died away, faded into silence. But the vibration still remained; it had not passed away. Perhaps it never would, a final, lasting testimony to freedom when all hope was lost.
It's not super good, I'm afraid. "------" is the main character - I haven't come up with a name for her yet.