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And, I had made RedPaw Alpha Male but now I can't change it either. Hrm ... Bummer.​



RED PAW​

he watched... as the sun rose over the snowy hills as he lied his his small den alone. He had no mate nor pups to care for. He was alone, an Alpha without a mate. He didn't see many other members of the pack out and going yet this early although in a few short moments the pups would be wandering around, curiously as they follow their parents.

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Neith padded carefully through the shaows of trees. The song of long forgotten times wafted through the air. It found no place in the ears of the foggy white wolf. He legs tensed, her ears deaf to all the world except for the hare she stalked. Her slightly ragged tail swiching over the ground, she bolted towards her prey. The rabbit jumped, and both creatures wound through the ancient forest as she raced after it.
 
Not meaning to be rude, but Chicken Tamer, could you post at least three detailed sentences for us? No just one liners. Sorry.​


RED PAW​

RedPaw slowly strode out of his den, his paws instantly feeling the crispy hard packed snow touch his body. He heaved in a small breath which hurt for his lungs because of how freezing it was outside. His breath shone in the frosty air as he exhaled as he walked around the camp area. Some small pups ran in front of him, his body putting a halt to it's heavy weight.

He smirked a bit but then lowered his head and kept moving on. He noticed one of the pack wolves Neith chasing after a rabbit and emerging into the woods.He would of gone after it with her but it wasn't a responsible type of thing to do, playing around and trying to chase small creatures. He was the Alpha and he was supposed to catch the large animals with the rest of the pack.
 
Neith snapped at the rabbit. She was as sure as a mountain goat's footing she had got it, but brought her head up open handed. She noticed a nother wolf and growled, "Hey, you could have--"
Neith stoppeded herself. That's the alpha, you fool! she thought.
Her tail drooping, she trotted farther into the forest.
 
Everybody can join, but I just think that we need to know a bit more information in a post. Like the mood, place/where character is at, doing or about to be doing, thinking/etc. You get it? And, when fighting scenes I don't want there to be gore or detail them but the movements and action/etc is still fine. And, yes, you can make a healer wolf. Actually, we need a few of those but yes. You can. :D Also, I am replying soon for RedPaw.
 

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