Farm chatter

[black_cat]

Can I suggest a couple corrections?

Of course!

 

[CHlCKEN]

One of my brothers got given a chocolate bar by one of the staff in a Santa costume in the supermarket one year. He threw the chocolate bar right back at the poor man.

We were probably told a few too many times not to accept sweets from strangers.

I was in a thrift store one day a long time ago, browsing through all the random items. A man in his late 60s came up to me and dropped a mint in my hand that had a bible verse on it. He said “HAVE YOU EVER CONSIDERED FOLLOWING THE LORD OUR GOD? FOLLOW HIM! DO JOT CONTINUE IN YOUR EVIL WAYS” Then he walked off to give his speech to someone else.

I Put the candy in the trash. Not because I am afraid of Christianity, because I was afraid of this man who had tattoos covering his arms, and a baggy of Jesus Mints

 

[black_cat]

Remember that the lineart isn't finished, so things like 'it looks wavery' aren't really necessary lol
but anatomy stuff is super helpful

 

[black_cat]

Also I can't find pictures of the color red wheaten? I can only find red pyle and black breasted red.

 

[human1]

I was in a thrift store one day a long time ago, browsing through all the random items. A man in his late 60s came up to me and dropped a mint in my hand that had a bible verse on it. He said “HAVE YOU EVER CONSIDERED FOLLOWING THE LORD OUR GOD? FOLLOW HIM! DO JOT CONTINUE IN YOUR EVIL WAYS” Then he walked off to give his speech to someone else.

I Put the candy in the trash. Not because I am afraid of Christianity, because I was afraid of this man who had tattoos covering his arms, and a baggy of Jesus Mints

wait is it sopposed to say 'JOT' instead of 'NOT'?

 

[MysteryChicken]

@MysteryChicken
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Make the comb less elongated? It's supposed to be a strawberry comb. Posture needs to be abit more erect, & shanks slightly fatter, & longer.

 

[MysteryChicken]

Also I can't find pictures of the color red wheaten? I can only find red pyle and black breasted red.

I posted Red Wheaten with my suggestion.

 

[ChickForLife]

OMG I JUST SAW THIS! @JadeFarms

 

[black_cat]

Make the comb less elongated? It's supposed to be a strawberry comb. Posture needs to be abit more erect, & shanks slightly fatter, & longer.
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Oh, ok. I didn't know the comb type. Other stuff sounds good!

 

[black_cat]

OMG I JUST SAW THIS! @JadeFarms

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That's Odd and Emma, partners in crime