thanks everyone for all the kind words! I'll be working on the next chapter... It's REALLY HARD to write a story through a chickens eyes, as I'm not there all the time. But everything I've typed (major events of being in the box on their first day, lily dying, them being put into a cage in The Outside, Senka, the coon, death, the biggest two legged finding the head- I was with him at the time and noticed serenia was gone, ((the girls weren't named, except for amulet, as when they stopped laying we WERE going to kill the chickens except Amulet, nicknamed Ammy- for meat, but ended up keeping them, as you can't have just one chicken!)) the four hens in which two turned out to be roos so we killed the roos and sold the hens, and The Food Lady moving the food and water into the other run! That was a keyboardfull)
on this story is true!
(edited because my comp is a potatoe)