Find Me Where The Wild Things Are

[Dominique King]

I haven’t tried to write a story for awhile!

 

[Dominique King]

@Tesorasena

 

[Dominique King]

Does anyone know where Tes went?

 

[Hannah Jean]

Does anyone know where Tes went?

she got banned... she will be back on the 27th

 

[Dominique King]

she got banned... she will be back on the 27th

Oph…I have behaved very well so I am not getting banned!

 

[Barnette]

Hey guys!
I am writing a story and this is the prologue and I want to know what you think!
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It's amazing!! I would honestly read more of that!!

 

[OrpingtonManiac]

Hey guys!
I am writing a story and this is the prologue and I want to know what you think!
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Its really good!!

 

[Hannah Jean]

Hey guys!
I am writing a story and this is the prologue and I want to know what you think!
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Tesorosena says that is sounds really cool, but that maybe add a bit less detail to how they are talking and more on descripting what they look like and the setting, and make it flow a little bit, and she also says it is seriously sounding awesome and she is looking forward to reading more!

 

[Barnette]

@Dominique King do you want some constructive criticism from me on that story or were you just sharing it with us?

 

[OrpingtonManiac]

Hiii @Noraaaaa !