~>Fury of the Wind<~ (A Bird RP)

[RoostersAreAwesome]

Molly glared at her “I don’t steal your chicks. Blame it on some other Raven-not me!” She said spitefully

"Oh, we're blaming other ravens all right." Moss growled, her tone threatening.
"Please, Moss, let's just go. This raven obviously had nothing to do with it." The other crow murmured.
Moss turned to stare at him. "How do you know that, Weed? She was spying on us! She could be with the chicknappers!"
"We both know that's improbable. She might even be able to help us. Look, I'll ask her."
Moss looked away, an expression of disgust on her face.
"My friend didn't mean to accuse you of anything. She's.. we're just worried. A chick has been taken from a family, and when a chick is taken, every crow comes together to find them. Do you have any idea who would've done this, or where they could've taken her?" Weed asked, swooping down so Molly could hear him better.

Nanako: very funny. *she did admit that it did amuse her a bit.* though I dont want to think about meeting with either of them.

(Could you use quotation marks to show what she's saying? It makes it a lot less confusing. )

"Why not? The lieutenants are legendary!" Rocket trilled, bouncing on her toes.

 

[Butterscotchbitesfinger]

"Oh, we're blaming other ravens all right." Moss growled, her tone threatening.
"Please, Moss, let's just go. This raven obviously had nothing to do with it." The other crow murmured.
Moss turned to stare at him. "How do you know that, Weed? She was spying on us! She could be with the chicknappers!"
"We both know that's improbable. Look, I'll ask her."
Moss looked away, an expression of disgust on her face.
"My friend didn't mean to accuse you of anything. She's.. we're just worried. A chick has been taken from a family, and when a chick is taken, every crow comes together to find them. Do you have any idea who would've done this, or where they could've taken her?" Weed asked, swooping down so Molly could hear him better.

(Could you use quotation marks to show what she's saying? It makes it a lot less confusing. )

"Why not? The lieutenants are legendary!" Rocket trilled, bouncing on her toes.

Molly stared at him “I’m not sure but I’m sure I could find out for you”

 

[RoostersAreAwesome]

Molly stared at him “I’m not sure but I’m sure I could find out for you”

"You could?" Weed cases, surprised at her answer. "That would be great! The crow community will be grateful to you."
Moss looked on suspiciously.

 

[Butterscotchbitesfinger]

"You could?" Weed cases, surprised at her answer. "That would be great! The crow community will be grateful to you."
Moss looked on suspiciously.

Molly gave a swift nod “meet me back here in let’s say.. one week” she said

 

[RoostersAreAwesome]

Molly gave a swift nod “meet me back here in let’s say.. one week” she said

"One week?" Moss cawed, flying forward until their beaks were inches away. "She'll be dead by then! And how do we even know this isn't a trap?"
"Moss-"
"No, Weed. I'm not going to trust a.. raven on her word!"

 

[Butterscotchbitesfinger]

"One week?" Moss cawed, flying forward until their beaks were inches away. "She'll be dead by then! And how do we even know this isn't a trap?"
"Moss-"
"No, Weed. I'm not going to trust a.. raven on her word!"

“Fine” Molly snapped “I won’t help you”. Molly flapped her wings and flew off

 

[RoostersAreAwesome]

“Fine” Molly snapped “I won’t help you”. Molly flapped her wings and flew off

Moss glared after her, then alighted on the ground and puffed up her feathers. "We don't need your help anyway, chick-eater!" She screeched after the retreating raven.
"You've just scared away the best chance we had to find that chick!" Weed cawed in exasperation.
"She wasn't going to help us! Besides, with all the crows around looking for her, we'll have a better chance than a raven."
The two continued to argue. Meanwhile, Storm waited anxiously for Molly to get back. He had started to enjoy her company, however strange her mood swings were. What if she doesn't come back? What if she's abandoned me? He tried to shake the thoughts out of his head, but they kept coming back. She is so easily offended... I probably said the wrong thing and now she's gone! He scratched the ground nervously with a foot and dived into a nearby bush so he wouldn't be out in the open any longer.

 

[Butterscotchbitesfinger]

Moss glared after her, then alighted on the ground and puffed up her feathers. "We don't need your help anyway, chick-eater!" She screeched after the retreating raven.
"You've just scared away the best chance we had to find that chick!" Weed cawed in exasperation.
"She wasn't going to help us! Besides, with all the crows around looking for her, we'll have a better chance than a raven."
The two continued to argue. Meanwhile, Storm waited anxiously for Molly to get back. He had started to enjoy her company, however strange her mood swings were. What if she doesn't come back? What if she's abandoned me? He tried to shake the thoughts out of his head, but they kept coming back. She is so easily offended... I probably said the wrong thing and now she's gone! He scratched the ground nervously with a foot and dived into a nearby bush so he wouldn't be out in the open any longer.

Molly landed next to the bush “Storm?” She called “Storm...”

 

[Amer]

Moonlight began to descend below the treeline as all signs of civilization began to rush away towards the horizon. They'll be hiding here, Moonlight thought. Far away from pigeon territory. She glanced back at Blizzard. The elderly pigeon seemed to have no problem keeping up. Well, we are pigeons after all. More skillful in flight than any of the other birds in the territories.
Before Blizzard could object, Moonlight leapt toward the throat of the nearest raven, who just happened to be Earl.
Earl tilted his eye toward the strange firey black-and-white pigeon before him. Her pink toes were outstretched with bristling metal spikes and her powerful wings were spread wide -better for beating you with.
Oh. I should probably assume an aggressive stance, his sleep-dulled brain thought numbly.
What a very rude awakening from my nap.
The pigeon was screeching right now, her clear white eyes filled with heat. (You have to understand that to ravens, pigeons sound very high pitched.)
"Three fugitives wanted for commiting treason are hiding somewhere in the Four Territories. They were last seen flying towards Raven territory. They were as follows: a cream pigeon female with muffed legs, a gull, and a burrowing owl." Moonlight thought that she was keeping herself poised and calm, but she got a bit yelly (excuse my lack of English knowledge) at times.
"No. I haven't seen them."
Earl's hackles rose higher and higher as the pigeon spoke, growing twice his considerable size. A lieutenant. I should kill her. I could be punished for this, but I should kill her. "But
how does that give you the rights to cross the Raven border?" He growled.

 

[Anime2lover]

"Oh, we're blaming other ravens all right." Moss growled, her tone threatening.
"Please, Moss, let's just go. This raven obviously had nothing to do with it." The other crow murmured.
Moss turned to stare at him. "How do you know that, Weed? She was spying on us! She could be with the chicknappers!"
"We both know that's improbable. She might even be able to help us. Look, I'll ask her."
Moss looked away, an expression of disgust on her face.
"My friend didn't mean to accuse you of anything. She's.. we're just worried. A chick has been taken from a family, and when a chick is taken, every crow comes together to find them. Do you have any idea who would've done this, or where they could've taken her?" Weed asked, swooping down so Molly could hear him better.

(Could you use quotation marks to show what she's saying? It makes it a lot less confusing. )

"Why not? The lieutenants are legendary!" Rocket trilled, bouncing on her toes.

(In used to this format) nanako: {her rhought}, nanako: talking, *actions* but I can try it your way)

Nanako: "the last two times I met their members they chased me off from the food. They havent exactly been friendly to outsiders." *she flapped her wings as she said that, then pecked at a few nearby crumbs*