I like it I would maybe also request the rent's landlord's info and just double check with the landlord.
I need to add wording for allergies, we ran into a pup placed and the child was extremely allergic and I did get pup back in a week, HOWEVER, it could have been ugly should they have kept the pup longer as they wanted to just test the pup out more, if you get what I am saying. you cant do that to a pup, so I was nice and told them she needed to come back asap before she was older. The child was a fittin mess, you shoulda seen that girl her face eyes and all week, the tests showed severe reaction to cat, dog hair and dander and all sorta things.