In need of feedback.

[Christie Loves Silkies]

Could you please vist my page.
and give me feedback.
what i can add or how i can improve my page!
I feel there is something missing but I don't know what

Thank you.

https://www.backyardchickens.com/web/viewblog.php?id=106490

 

[BrattishTaz]

I like your page very much.

You set it up and told your story nicely. You have some very pretty birds. I would suggest you go back and capitalize the first letter of you sentences and the word "I".

 

[Christie Loves Silkies]

Oops I didn't notice that XD
Silly me

Thank you

I personally think my birds are beautiful, and I will be adding pictures of my new lot of hatchings when they come

 

[chickenjoefan]

lovely page and beautiful pictures of your gorgeous birds.

 

[Christie Loves Silkies]

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Thank you

I feel that pictures can tell the story better than words, I try to just fill in the parts I don't have pictures for.