My chicken story. :)

[equinehugger3]

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It's not the same for you!! HAHA, lol! I know how you feel about writing... I so don't feel like writing anymore on Banties, cause barely anyone reads it anymore

lol You don't seem to have the same problem though! HAHA

Mine isn't so good..I do it when I'm bored..like right now. lol. I'm writing it now.

First of all - YOURS IS GOOD!!! lol and second I so know what you mean lol

 

[The Turken Lady]

C H A P T E R
12

"What is it?!" Mini asked,looking down. She soon saw what it was. "THIS IS HORRIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!" She screamed so loud,it heard Pips ears. "Shut up!" Pigeon told her in a hushed voice. "You'll attract a predator." "Oh yeah.." Mini smiled. "Sorry." Pip looked down at the chicken skull they had uncovered. It had tons of scars on it,like the chicken had been in a big battle before it died. It's face was a look of defeat,frozen in a look of fear. It was big,about the size of Pip's head,and Pip was a large fowl,about 8 pounds,so it must've been big. The skull was stained white,with a mysterious red substance on it,that looked like dried blood.
"Hey,look at this!!!" Jack called ,interupting his thoughts. Pip almost dropped the skull,but he rushed over. Jack was holding a full set of greekish looking armor,and put it on. "Do I look good or what?" He asked Pip. Pip handed him the skull and grabbed the armor off of Jack."Hey,EEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!" Jack screamed and handed it back to Pip,who put it down. He didn't care..this armor looked familiar some how...some how..some how.. He looked on the back..and saw why,he reconized the name etched on the back. Although it was some other language,Pip scrambled the letters together..and gasped...It couldn't be!!!!! Suddenly,his friends started screaming.
Pip placed on the armor,grabbed the sword,shield and helmet and turned around..Something hit him and he turned around. "Hey!!" Pip yelled. Another hit..and another..then with his vision fading,he fell unconsious to the ground...and everything blurred away.


Dramatic...

Uggh..I'm getting bad at codes.

 

[The Turken Lady]

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Mine isn't so good..I do it when I'm bored..like right now. lol. I'm writing it now.

First of all - YOURS IS GOOD!!! lol and second I so know what you mean lol

Lol. I just go along with the story when I'm bored..I don't even plan it..

 

[equinehugger3]

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First of all - YOURS IS GOOD!!! lol and second I so know what you mean lol

Lol. I just go along with the story when I'm bored..I don't even plan it..

I LOVE it! This new chapter is GREAT!!!

 

[chickens rule123]

aaaawwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeessssssooooooommmmmmmmeeeeeee

 

[The Turken Lady]

Ha ha,thanks everyone. I changed the chapter picture.

Please note that I'm not good at greek helmet things or chickens...

 

[equinehugger3]

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That's great! I love it!!! Lol

 

[The Turken Lady]

Thanks.

 

[The Turken Lady]

C H A P T E R
13

When Pip finally woke up,he felt tired. He seemed to be in a small clearing in the middle of a dreamy looking forest. Everything was misty and perfect.....too perfect. He scratched his head. Where was every one? Pip got up wearily and looked around."Γεια" Someone whispered in Greek. Pip turned around. "'Εγώ είμαι" The whispered voice said. Suddenly,a shadow stepped out of the darkness. "Το όνομά μου είναι Pipus Jackson." Pip scrambled to words in his head to find..
That the voice had said..
"Hello,it's me."
"My name is Pipus Jackson."
Pip looked at the ghost of Pipus. Noble and strong,he wore greek battle armor. He was colored bluish gray with no hint of his real color. Pipus looked Like Pip,but the bad side was he was covered in old and new scars.

He glared at Pip and mumbled something like this-

"Pip, να υγιεινής του φίλου προδότη»,
"Βρείτε αυτό που δεν τελειώνει ποτέ .."
"Ακολουθήστε το φως που ποτέ δεν κοιμάται»,
«Στην ανατολή ..."
"Ή θα πρέπει να παρακολουθήσετε την πτώση αυτοκρατορία»,
«Και αυτό είναι το τέλος .."
"Από όλα."

Which translated to..

"Pip,beware of the traitor friend,"
"Find the one that never ends.."
"Follow the light that never sleeps,"
"In the east..."
"Or you shall watch the empire fall,"
"And It shall be the end.."
"Of It all."

Then,Pipus glowed,and disappeared. Pip had to get out of here..whatever this meant,he had to figure it out. This was more then just a quest for the crystal bug..It was a quest to save it all..



END OF BOOK 1.

I know,it has..no plot..no planning..It's not good,and I got a little carried away..with the greek and all..

E P I C
F A I L

I'll write the second book later.

 

[awesomefowl]

Somebody's been reading too much Percy Jackson...

GREAt story though!!!!!!!! :