~My life as a broiler hen~ Updated full story so far on page 3!

[Fierlin1182]

This is good. I like this story. It IS an interesting style of writing, I like the types when they're finding out who they are and having moments of revelation

 

[cochinGurl]

haha thanks, I'm glad you like it.

What do you guys think I could improve?

 

[Fierlin1182]

There are a few little mistakes, like capital letters and 'a' instead of 'I', but I like the idea of the overall story.

Much better than my attempt at the start of my chooks' lives.

(I could go through and correct the little mistakes, I have too much time on my hands like that

)

 

[cochinGurl]

ya, I do need to fix some if the lil' grammar errors and what not. Ill work on that tomorrow prolly.
I'm glad you like it in genaral tho.

 

[Fierlin1182]

Ahh, well you're on the right track. I like.

I'm trying to write a story of my own, if only I could get onto Gmail to confirm my scripting account!

(It's blocked)

 

[cochinGurl]

That sucks!

hope you can get it on here. whats it about?

 

[Fierlin1182]

Business. Takeovers. Debt. Protests, airlines, national spirit...

Probably wouldn't interest many on here. It's still in early planning stages, I've not even figured out proper character profiles yet

Anyhow, I won't hijack your thread any longer. I'll shut up now.

 

[cochinGurl]

haha no problem, the more the merrier!

 

[cochinGurl]

sorry no new chapters guyz. I am really bogged down with school work right now, and Im going on a trip for almost a week, so I can t post until after that, but check back after that! again, SOOOOOO sorry.

ill make it up to you guys, ill post a bunch when i get back!!! <3 <3 <3

-cochingurl-

 

[Fierlin1182]

No problem!

It happened to me too. I don't think I have time for anything besides BYC and school anymore...

Let alone writing!