Best to wait to make an article until coop has been used for a season(or 4), that way tweaks/improvements can be included.
I'd put HC over the chicken wire, raccoons could bite thru the CW and/or snakes and weasels could get thru CW holes....not to mention rodents.
It's a nice hoop, one of the best I've seen.
Will it be movable or stationary?
If stationary, might think about anti-dig aprons:
Good examples of anti-dig apron installation, tho I'd not recommend 1/2" HC (unless you have small rodents like rats)...go with 14ga 1x2 or 1x1, will hold up much longer and is easier to lay flat.
http://www.backyardchickens.com/t/1110498/wire-around-coop#post_17093528
https://www.backyardchickens.com/threads/new-coop-project.1169916/page-2#post-18481208
Don't think you need that skinny ramp up to nests, you've got a nice landing ledge there that should suffice.
How many birds do you plan on keeping?
