The reach of her head is awesome, but her beak is at the edge of the frame. No space for her to gaze to.
You obviously have much higher expectations of your photography than most!This one isn't bad, but I had to let them eat most of the guts to get them in view. As a result, I lost a lot of texture and interest that I got with the picture I entered.
I think those pictures are awesome!
Very creative!