one of my poems. (i added another one, guys!)

[Stormhorse23]

yeah. its not so great when i go for happy. its like pretending to be someone im not and comes out all weird

 

[ilovemychickies]

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BRAVO!!! That was great!

 

[Stormhorse23]

thanks. working on the happy concept, but the happy concept is not working for me! haha. ill write one about my new cheepers later. Funny story, i have a little sister who is only 10 and a lot less mature than you! She asked me what i was going to do with the 2 chicks that died in shipping. so i held them up to my face and said i was either going to do my ozzy imatation (ya know what that means) or keep their dead bodies to see if they turned into zombies. she about cried!!!! k. im done

 

[Cheekon]

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I agree!

 

[ilovemychickies]

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Really? Thanks. I'm glad that you think that I'm mature! I really like it when your poems are happy. I told you that you are able to do happy stuff!

You are so talented at writing poems. My poems aren't as...um... smooth as yours. Smooth is the only word that I could think of. They just flow so much better than mine.

Ashleigh

 

[Chickerdoodle13]

Your poems are very good! I do my best writing when I'm sad. When I write pieces while in a good mood, they usually end up very sarcastic! I love writing humor, but I can't honestly say how good I am at it! LOL

I will have to post one of my little stories I wrote about a horse who passed a little over a year ago. I will be sure to make a new thread!

 

[Stormhorse23]

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Really? Thanks. I'm glad that you think that I'm mature! I really like it when your poems are happy. I told you that you are able to do happy stuff!

You are so talented at writing poems. My poems aren't as...um... smooth as yours. Smooth is the only word that I could think of. They just flow so much better than mine.

Ashleigh

takes lots of time. ive been writing poems since i could write and they started about fish diseases. i dont know why, but i guess as a young child, i liked to write about fish diseases. i was a nerdy little kid

 

[ilovemychickies]

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Really? Thanks. I'm glad that you think that I'm mature! I really like it when your poems are happy. I told you that you are able to do happy stuff!

You are so talented at writing poems. My poems aren't as...um... smooth as yours. Smooth is the only word that I could think of. They just flow so much better than mine.

Ashleigh

takes lots of time. ive been writing poems since i could write and they started about fish diseases. i dont know why, but i guess as a young child, i liked to write about fish diseases. i was a nerdy little kid

LOL! I bet that you weren't nerdy.

 

[countryboy]

after reading some of this i was wondering, have you ever given ant thought to putting some to music. im not saying to turn away from poems, but some of your writing might be put to music. just a thought. poetry is a good thing, keep it up.

 

[Stormhorse23]

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no. i havent. maybe ill even attempt to sing!