It's more of a mental approach kind of suggestion honestly. There's nothing wrong with this photo. It's a snapshot, and as it goes, it's just fine. Not every photo is going to be a masterpiece, and no sane amount of editing will turn a shapshot into a cover shot. This is a good photograph without having to put a lot of effort into it. Learning that threshold is just as important as learning how to edit them in post. Not everythng is perfect, and it's OK to say "this is good enough".
