If it were me, I'd move that hardware cloth up under the roof because bad gases, humidity, and heat like to rise.
I also like to make at least one area with low "intake" ventilation so if it's hot you can get a proper chimney effect going. And if it's a very still night, co2 (which sinks) won't be able to build up at floor level.
Doing a full-length hardware cloth door accomplishes that while also letting you see in, and the chickens see out so you can enter without startling everybody.
Expanding your overhang helps increase shade in the coop, prevent storms from constantly soaking your siding or blowing in sideways rain, and if on one end you add a bit more extra overhang you can protect an outdoor waterer and feeder.
Your dimensions seem a bit odd-numbered.
@3KillerBs has one of the cleverest bits of advice I have
ever heard, and that is to plan your build according to the dimensions lumber is sold in. I think it's increments of 4ft? (please correct me)
I mean, it makes me feel so silly for all the times I walked out of the hardware store with "extra" lumber after the cuts which I still had to pay for. "Well, we can make perches." ... lots and lots of perches.
ETA: Looking at it again, your hardware cloth dimensions are running into the same problem. 2'6" wide isn't a size I've seen on the market (unless you've already sourced your supplies?). I've seen a lot of 18", 36", and 48" wide. So that's a lot of labor cutting it, and leftovers that are hard to use.
ETA again: Putting it up on concrete blocks, and as a walk-in, means you need a fully framed out support for the floor and then a wood floor... so that's a lot of money sunk into the poopy side. Bags of concrete would be cheaper. Some gravel and then landscape cloth and then sand would be cheaper. Burying a hardware cloth apron and then doing deep litter would be cheaper. Unless your wood is affordably sourced of course.
Living in a humid, hot environment, my favorite coop was mostly hardware cloth with an oversized roof, an Aviary look. We had to leave it behind, now we have one that's half mesh walls and half enclosed (a former stall) and one that was a shed with ventilation added. The stall coop is far superior to the shed, in my view.