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[Fierlin1182]

That's cool!
I wish I had the talent for coming up with something other than strangely funny comic strips

I can't wait to find out what happens next. Who hit her?

 

[TeriyakiChicken]

This is great!

 

[DinosRBirds]

ray's two cents :

That's cool!
I wish I had the talent for coming up with something other than strangely funny comic strips

I can't wait to find out what happens next. Who hit her?

I don't even know yet​

 

[Mother_Hen2011]

Wow

It makes me want to post my story on here as well.. LOL Would you read mine? I subscribed to your thread hope you dont mind but I want to make sure i dont miss a single thing!

 

[DinosRBirds]

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Yes, I would read it.

 

[Mother_Hen2011]

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Yes, I would read it.

I will post it soon I only have the first page written! Make sure You write some more

Cant wait to read more!!

 

[DinosRBirds]

"Her wounds are healing nicely, but as you can see,"he gestured towards the cast on my leg,"she won't be fully healed for a while.
I suddemly thought of somethimg. Has anyone told Amy that i'm, ok?She must be worried.
"Gimme the phone." I said. I wasn't talkimg to any certain person.
"There is no phone in here, hon." My dad said.
"Then gimme your phone."
"Phones aren't supposed to be on in the hospital." Mom chimed in.
So now I can't call amy.That's great. I had to tell Amy. I wanted to hear her voice. Just for a few minutes. I guess I can't do that.
"You should go to sleep," mom said, "You'll need it.
In the course of five minutes, I was fast asleep.

Hospital
I woke up about five hours later, hearing doctors pushing something on wheels through the hall.
The halls weren't as busy as earlier, so I snuck out, planning on finding a phone.
Amy's parents were out of town, and she was all alone.
That worried me. She could be in danger.
There was no one behind the check-in desk. Bingo.
I went behind it, and started dialing her cell.
I heard her voice, frantic, say ,"help!" And then a man in the background, saying things i couldn't hear well.
I heard the sound of crashing glass.
" Where are you? " I asked...

To be.continued....

 

[Mother_Hen2011]

Oh wow!!!

Its getting sad now Good work hun I posted mine. you need the link?


(Edited to add link)
https://www.backyardchickens.com/forum/viewtopic.php?id=568854

 

[DinosRBirds]

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not for long

 

[Mother_Hen2011]

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not for long

cant wait to read some more