Suggestions in re: These Ventilation Cartoons?

[kcan2]

I have entertained the possibility of presenting that one as a hen on a rotisserie -- because I have often used the phrase "Don't turn your coop into a rotisserie".

But I don't know if that would ruin what I hope is the lighthearted humor of the series.

Maybe the bikini could work.

Yes, although a coop rotisserie sounds innocent enough in word, a visual representation might give it more of a macabre feel. On the other hand, bikinis can be equally distracting

 

[muddy75]

@muddy75

Did someone say ???

 

[Saveria]

Like this?

 

[3KillerBs]

OK, no bikini. How's this look? Not too grim?

Should I have put her skirt on?

 

[mowin]

OK, no bikini. How's this look? Not too grim?

Should I have put her skirt on?

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I'm gonna go out on a limb here.... and predict your not a art teacher.... lol.

 

[3KillerBs]

I'm gonna go out on a limb here.... and predict your not a art teacher.... lol.

I can't draw at all.

But I *can* diagram.

 

[Nellzmom]

OK, no bikini. How's this look? Not too grim?

Should I have put her skirt on?

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I think this one is good. The skirt would confuse the chicken drawing. I see this as more sad than macabre, but I think it’s an important point to get across.

 

[Saveria]

I think you should write an article about this if you haven't already (one that includes these).

 

[Saveria]

I think the drawings totally work to clarify the differences.

 

[3KillerBs]

I think you should write an article about this if you haven't already (one that includes these).

That's actually what I'm working on.

I made the original drawing for my Hot Climate article then I made the upskirt and downskirt drawings yesterday and thought, "I should make a full series of these."