Suggestions in re: These Ventilation Cartoons?

[3KillerBs]

First off, I know that I can't draw. But I *can* diagram and I've been trying to expand on my collection of ventilation/airflow diagrams made as crayon cartoons in Paint (the only drawing software I have access too).

I'd appreciate any suggestions on improving/adding to this series of illustrations of airflow -- good and bad.

First, my original diagram:

I think I could improve this by adding a hen and using varying thickness lines to indicate a gentle rise of air.

This one has the hen but not the indication of gentle rise vs more active air movement:

This shows one kind of draftiness with and without a hen:

And another kind of draftiness:

I think I need to show how the 3-sided shelter for an open air coop works as well. Anything else?

Any suggestions on how to illustrate a hen suffering in a hot, stuffy, stale coop?

 

[nuthatched]

How about a little hen sweating with a glass of ice tea?

 

[Buckingham Palace]

First off, I know that I can't draw. But I *can* diagram and I've been trying to expand on my collection of ventilation/airflow diagrams made as crayon cartoons in Paint (the only drawing software I have access too).

I'd appreciate any suggestions on improving/adding to this series of illustrations of airflow -- good and bad.

First, my original diagram:

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I think I could improve this by adding a hen and using varying thickness lines to indicate a gentle rise of air.

This one has the hen but not the indication of gentle rise vs more active air movement:

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This shows one kind of draftiness with and without a hen:

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And another kind of draftiness:

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I think I need to show how the 3-sided shelter for an open air coop works as well. Anything else?

Any suggestions on how to illustrate a hen suffering in a hot, stuffy, stale coop?

Wings away from body open beak some sweat. Really nice disarms I love the chicken.

 

[DavidReaves]

First off, I know that I can't draw. But I *can* diagram and I've been trying to expand on my collection of ventilation/airflow diagrams made as crayon cartoons in Paint (the only drawing software I have access too).

I'd appreciate any suggestions on improving/adding to this series of illustrations of airflow -- good and bad.

First, my original diagram:

View attachment 3114370

I think I could improve this by adding a hen and using varying thickness lines to indicate a gentle rise of air.

This one has the hen but not the indication of gentle rise vs more active air movement:

View attachment 3114377

This shows one kind of draftiness with and without a hen:

View attachment 3114373View attachment 3114375

And another kind of draftiness:

View attachment 3114374

I think I need to show how the 3-sided shelter for an open air coop works as well. Anything else?

Any suggestions on how to illustrate a hen suffering in a hot, stuffy, stale coop?

I love the skirt flying up and the skirt and scarf flying sideways in the various diagrams!

 

[3KillerBs]

I love the skirt flying up and the skirt and scarf flying sideways in the various diagrams!

I might add the scarf to all the diagrams for consistency.

 

[Saveria]

I actually love your drawings

 

[kcan2]

The best! Mighty impressive Paint creations!
Hen in a hot coop could be upside down with feet sticking up, with wavy red vertical lines pointing upward? Maybe she could have on a bikini for that one.

 

[3KillerBs]

Hen in a hot coop could be upside down with feet sticking up, with wavy red vertical lines pointing upward? Maybe she could have on a bikini for that one.

I have entertained the possibility of presenting that one as a hen on a rotisserie -- because I have often used the phrase "Don't turn your coop into a rotisserie".

But I don't know if that would ruin what I hope is the lighthearted humor of the series.

Maybe the bikini could work.

 

[Buckingham Palace]

Can’t wait to see them.

 

[Silkie Princess]

Maybe she could have on a bikini for that one.

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