T̷h̷e̸ ̵G̶a̴m̸e̵ (Chat Thread)

[Cluckcluck1215]

I think we all feel the same as you. What we write isn't good enough. But the only way to get better is to write, and the only way to get more comfortable is to put it out there.

I don't think we're judging other peoples writing critically. Maybe looking at how everyone else is better than our own. There's so much fiddling work I want to do with mine, but I guess I decided I worked long enough. It is a snapshot of where I am writing wise at this point, and while extra time spent could make it better, the amount of frustration isn't worth the struggle to make it better, and possibly lose the intended feeling. ???

It's the same as art, it may not be perfect but there's a point where improving on what you've got isn't worth the stress. Or maybe admitting to myself that I'm not at that stage yet? Where I can do better.

Almost like I need to improve on my building blocks to improve on the outcome. But not knowing where to begin.... I've gone on and on here... Hopefully my point isn't lost in wordiness.

Your point wasn't lost, I understand.
I have that problem. I write and write and write and try to make it seem better but it only makes it worse.

I READ YOUR POST AND YOU'RE NOWHERE NEAR AS BAD AS YOU SAY???


I agree!

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The thing is, I don't think anyone is ever completely content with what they create. We always judge ourselves by our own shortcomings, when the only thing that should matter that much is how much fun we had doing it. That's rarely the case though. XD

I- thank you, TM, I appreciate it

 

[RiverStorm]

I've got hair fic to write now

OH YOU OF PERFECT RECALL
WHAT A WONDERFUL STATE OF MIND IT MUST BE

O h n o i m t e r r i f i e d

you go, you write that hair fic bro

lol no I did remember the gist of it but I just searched to find and copy and paste that

I like how you've learned to fear when I post something :3

hi you all scare me you all write incredibly well and my mediocre word vomiting does not belong here im so sorry
i will try but will never succeed in being as wonderful as you all are

Dude, you don't know just how awesome you are
You're one of the people on here that I've always looked up to the writing abilities of (I've always admired the writing of everyone in this RP)
I don't really know what to say to expand on what Kate and TM said, but they're definitely right, and I think people have a tendency to dislike their creations because they fall short of their own expectations, but in reality it's really amazing.
In other words, I think you're a really awesome writer and I love all your posts, Jinx.

 

[Amer]

Name: Sphagnum
Age: Impossible to perceive, but has been vibing in human society for about three decades.
Gender: None. Whatever gave you the notion that they're obligated to confine themselves to an overrated human social construct?
Pronouns: None specified. Whatever others choose to use will work. Most of the time. And, wait, were you even given referral rights?
User ID: 1
Personality:
A true neutral chaotic maniac, yet operates with elegant flourish. Doesn't seem to have the capacity to experience any particularly adverse emotion, in either direction. Extremely confident in its own ability to preserve itself and remain elevated above everything in the process. The egocentrism hasn't yet encountered any limitations.
Can and will instigate discord for amusement. Thrives off of mayhem and gets the biggest kicks out of impediments. Quite intrigued by the fragile, unpredictable mortal psyche and will periodically fixate on someone in an attempt to gain an understanding of their mindset.
Indelicately flirtatious in virtually all mannerisms, but is personally incapable of experiencing attraction. Then factor in that serious narcissus complex.
Contrary to the essence of its being, Sphagum's a stickler for following through with vows. It's dependable- in its own roundabout, anarchic way.
Also, has this ingrained thing for confiscating mortal children. Gets very possessive of its abductees. Excellent babysitter potential.
Picture/Description:
Probably stands at 7' tall and then some. Has nothing to hide, but people seem most comfortable around clothed beings, and so compromise was made. Always wearing its tattered sash; otherwise likes to frequent loose-fitting jackets and slacks. Skin has the appearance of an epidote formation, and feels sparsely graveled to the touch, but it's entirely flexible. A set of living antlers branches out from the fractured bark frill on the backside of its head. Slanted, reptilian eyes. A luminous yellow essence emits from eyes and mouth when open. Hardly prominent snout over a mouthful of elongated black teeth. Tufts of leaves where ears should be- unclear whether that's an actual auditory system or not. Two freelance root systems; those descending from the neck are generally useless. Digitigrade legs that end in cracked stone hooves. Crazy long fingers and thiccccccc arms.
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Username: HeavensHens88
Other (weaknesses, habits, or special abilities):
A Spriggan- powerful nature spirit out of Cornish legend that takes form from organic matter. This one was perfectly average until the lure of the human rat race got to it. When Sphagnum willed itself to disconnect from its original environment, it began to function pretty much as a mortal, except it still sources its nutrition from the soils it roots into.
Which might just prove an issue in a virtual reality- SPONTANEOUS DIGESTIVE SYSTEM DEVELOPMENT TIME???
Fire is a definite weakness. The herbaceous parts are just as vulnerable to pests and blights as normal plants. Since Sphagnum literally anchors down into the ground wherever it goes, movement at a fast clip isn't attainable.
A multifaceted mimic, think camouflage- doesn't exactly conform to the environment, but has the ability to morph to a believable biotic fixture within it. This extends to absorbing and adopting the voice of whoever last spoke. It's a flawless mimicry that typically makes conversation extremely uncomfortable for the owner of the voice being utilized.
Sphagnum possesses and regularly wields the inhuman -how punny of me- strength typical to spriggans.
Yes, I am fully aware that writing a genderless cryptid without set pronouns is going to be borderline impossible.
Inconvenience is the point.

How did I miss this? This is a truly terrifying and wonderful creature.

Name: Jack Hernández
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Pronouns: He/him
User ID: 59
Personality: Loud, basically 99% of what he says is meant to be humorous. Overly confident, even in situations where he has no idea what’s going on. Refuses to vocalize his thought process, unless to annoy people. Never thinks before he speaks, and almost never before he acts. Sometimes acts like a genius, other times.. not so much. Can be obnoxious. However, he is generally friendly and accepting. Has absolutely no clue how to comfort people, and never opens up to others about how he’s feeling. Enjoys making people he considers his friends laugh.
Picture/Description: (Will not be drawing him. Unless as a stick figure. ) 5’ 8” tall, dark brown eyes, and dark brown hair that goes to his ears and sort of poofs up right it gets into his eyes (I don’t know how to describe hair). Currently wearing cargo pants and a bomber jacket. His dad is Latin American and his mom is Vietnamese.
Username: @RoostersAreAwesome
Other (weaknesses, habits, or special abilities): Has an amount of survivalist knowledge due to the insistence of a certain part-time-invisible cousin who may or may not be named Charlie. His cousin’s explanation was that he “wished I knew this stuff when I was your age” and “it might be useful one day”. Jack didn’t understand what that meant, but he enjoyed it anyway. Has a casual interest in the martial arts. Doesn’t seem affected by the cold, but can’t stand hot weather. Has no powers that he knows of. Has an unfortunate subconscious habit of picking at things, so should not be handed anything delicate or easily dismantled. Likes animals, and they generally like him, though he doesn’t know much about them and doesn’t have any pets.


I originally posted this maybe 10 minutes ago, but due to bad internet it got deleted and I had to rewrite everything. :/ I might edit this later if I remember something I missed.

I love this guy. So much. The connection with Charlie too. 10/10 would totally go backpacking with.

the mexican in me had to.
its the only remedy for ALL sicknesses and injuries

The my dad in me makes vaseline the only viable option for skin/abrasion care.

I prefer the Fabian one. But that is probably personal preference.

I don't know how to word the difference. I guess Fabian is written from perspective, we don't know if what's written is fully accurate but they act on what they perceive. Where as with Leita it feels like she's telling me literally what's happening, her perspective is an after thought.

I don't think there's anything wrong with either, it's just different. I've been trying to mesh the two types together, but I don't know if it really works, it feels awkward doing it.

I like the Fabian one better too. You can put yourself in the character better, and know how their surroundings are percieved.

 

[FrankieDoodle]

I’m seriously impressed with everyone’s ability to describe stuff.

What happens if they don’t take their bag with them

I've got hair fic to write now

OH YOU OF PERFECT RECALL
WHAT A WONDERFUL STATE OF MIND IT MUST BE

you have no choice in the matter

She might just be tempted to get over her terminal detachment for him, perhaps







wow that was ridiculously punny
I'm on another level with my dad jokes

oh no



O h n o i m t e r r i f i e d

says all i need to know

Imagine even having started something

u bri'ish m8te

Z E R O
OH MY WORD I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHO THIS IS

I'll take that threat thanks

yessss

Your dad jokes are wonderful. XD

hi you all scare me you all write incredibly well and my mediocre word vomiting does not belong here im so sorry
i will try but will never succeed in being as wonderful as you all are

Mediocre word vomiting? What are these lies I’m hearing? Dude, your writing is great. I’ve always been extremely impressed by it, and I really love how effortlessly you can choose words.
And trust me, I wouldn’t say this if it wasn’t true.

 

[Yowza Wowza]

I’m seriously impressed with everyone’s ability to describe stuff.

What happens if they don’t take their bag with them

It’ll despawn after a while if they don’t take it

 

[Cluckcluck1215]

you go, you write that hair fic bro

lol no I did remember the gist of it but I just searched to find and copy and paste that

I like how you've learned to fear when I post something :3

Dude, you don't know just how awesome you are
You're one of the people on here that I've always looked up to the writing abilities of (I've always admired the writing of everyone in this RP)
I don't really know what to say to expand on what Kate and TM said, but they're definitely right, and I think people have a tendency to dislike their creations because they fall short of their own expectations, but in reality it's really amazing.
In other words, I think you're a really awesome writer and I love all your posts, Jinx.

I- thank you so much Riv, that makes me so happy.

I’m seriously impressed with everyone’s ability to describe stuff.

What happens if they don’t take their bag with them

yessss

Your dad jokes are wonderful. XD

Mediocre word vomiting? What are these lies I’m hearing? Dude, your writing is great. I’ve always been extremely impressed by it, and I really love how effortlessly you can choose words.
And trust me, I wouldn’t say this if it wasn’t true.

Thank you so much Lee, I really, really appreciate it

 

[Cluckcluck1215]

i forgot that i have to write more then one sentence an hour to actually rp four characters lol

 

[TamingMaster]

How did I miss this? This is a truly terrifying and wonderful creature.

I love this guy. So much. The connection with Charlie too. 10/10 would totally go backpacking with.


The my dad in me makes vaseline the only viable option for skin/abrasion care.

I like the Fabian one better too. You can put yourself in the character better, and know how their surroundings are percieved.

Ty! I think that's the type of writing style I'm going to stick with from now on. XD

 

[Butterscotchbitesfinger]

hi you all scare me you all write incredibly well and my mediocre word vomiting does not belong here im so sorry
i will try but will never succeed in being as wonderful as you all are

Um. You are an awesome writer! Like seriously you write some great posts, I can never master the spacing that everyone else has which makes there posts so much more awesome mine looks like a blob on the screen lol

 

[FrankieDoodle]

It’ll despawn after a while if they don’t take it

Cool, thanks. I’m debating whether or not Zayne is going to be the idiot that leaves it. XD