~Temptation~ My New Book!

[<3ChickenForever]

more!!!!

 

[horsecrazychicklovingkid]

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Sorry, I'll add more detail of how she got outside.

I couldn't help myself.

 

[horsecrazychicklovingkid]

Must . . . . . . . . Have . . . . . . . . . More . . . . . . . . . . (while crawling slowly, hand over hand across a desert)

 

[DuckLover179]

Finally I found the church, and opened the doors. I noticed Pastor John, praying.

“Are you okay?” I asked softly.

“Yes, fine. How are your parents?” He asked.

“They, umm… Dad, uhh, passed.” I said sadly, trying not to cry. “Mom is in critical care. They’re not sure if she’ll make it. Or the baby…” I sighed.

“I’m so sorry.” He said genuinely. “You’re welcome to stay here for the night if you need.” He said.

“Thanks.” I replied, laying on one of the benches.

Shortly after, Pastor John left, and I was alone with my thoughts. If I had made my speech longer, We would have left later… Was this my fault? Is mom going to be okay?! I thought. I considered the thought of me being alone my whole life. Would I be able to survive this?!

I slowly drifted off. Soon it was morning, and I heard the small birds chirping. I stretched my arms in the air, and sat up. Pastor John ran in frantically, “It’s your mom. They need you at the hospital now!” He said, pointing to his truck “I’ll drive you over”.

I ran to his truck, and opened the passenger door. I jumped in, and stared straight ahead.

“Sorry, I know you don’t like driving…” He sighed, pushing on the gas.

“It’s okay.” I said quietly.

We soon arrived to the hospital, and ran to the front desk. Pastor John asked the nurse what happened.

“Your mother’s brain was affected in the crash. She has… Umm, Mental issues now.” The woman sighed, looking at me. I could tell she didn't want to say anything specific in front of me.

“The baby?!” I said, starting to cry.


More tomorrow!

 

[DuckLover179]

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[horsecrazychicklovingkid]

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Don't laugh at me!

 

[Amigo]

Critical care? It's more proper for it to be "critical condition". Good story so far.

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[DuckLover179]

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http://www.nlm.nih.gov/medlineplus/criticalcare.html

Thanks!

 

[horsecrazychicklovingkid]

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http://www.nlm.nih.gov/medlineplus/criticalcare.html

Thanks!

Yep! my dad has been in intensive care, several times actually.

 

[equinehugger3]

Duck.

One word:

AMAZING.