Hey Clucks I actually wanna suggest something for your rp, I think it's actually cool and creative and I'm probably definitely gonna join! But can I suggest that maybe instead of saying "Where are The Pure Souls?
They are being held captive by humans. They have free roam of a giant mansion, but are never allowed outside."
Like I think the Pure Souls and the humans should be working together to avoid the Angels and Demons, in this it sounds like the Pure Souls are hostages and I just think it would be more beneficial if instead of a captor relationship that the humans and Pure Souls be working actively together and towards the same goal ya know? Like maybe instead of not being allowed out, there's just a mutual agreement not to go outside because of the obvious threat of capture?
They are being held captive by humans. They have free roam of a giant mansion, but are never allowed outside."
Like I think the Pure Souls and the humans should be working together to avoid the Angels and Demons, in this it sounds like the Pure Souls are hostages and I just think it would be more beneficial if instead of a captor relationship that the humans and Pure Souls be working actively together and towards the same goal ya know? Like maybe instead of not being allowed out, there's just a mutual agreement not to go outside because of the obvious threat of capture?