The Omicron Games- Mipuppy1's and my story please read

[Mipuppy1]

Chapter 4 Freedom:

"What did you say?" The girl asked red sparks danced around her, he knew she would transform and attack anytime soon "I asked why you were crying" he answered simply though inside he was scared, it usually hurt to die! She looked at him her eyes were a sky blue. "Why are you so sad?" he asked "I-I don't know..." she answered her voice was gentle and soft... "Then why don't you come with me?" he asked carefully "I-I can't" she whispered. "Why?" He couldn't stop himself from asking "Because I can't leave..." She said unhappily. Then suddenly a light bulb- blinking yellow appeared above her head. Weird... He thought but clicked it, it read.
Congratulations! You have activated the secret quest!
If you finish this quest you may take this NPC boss as a 'pet'
All you have to do it break the red crystal necklace hanging around her neck! Good luck!
Ok... He thought this kept on getting weirder and weirder no problem though, this boss was probably really strong and he needed a team anyway all he had was himself and it was better to travel in teams the main people you need would be a priest(ess) the healer a magician- far ranged combat or necromancer, a closed combat- swordsman- or him. "Ok then..." He whispered to himself and charged at the necklace with his sword, it looked like glass a small and fragile thing wouldn't be so hard to break. WRONG! The moment his sword hit the necklace he was shocked and sent flying back "WHAT THE *censored*" he screamed angrily, the nymph girl giggled and seemed amused. "Shut up" he spat and got back up again. He charged at the necklace again with an angry shout he was hurled back again but each time he got up, finally the first crack appeared half his health was gone! He charged at the necklace again -5 health. He let out another shout of anger and charged at the necklace finally it shattered. "Now what?" He asked checking the quest again it was completed. Then a gray hologram profile appeared with a picture of the NPC boss to the right her stats on the left
Name: The Girl Who Doesn't Know How To Love.
What a sick name! He thought disgusted he was totally going to change that.
Level: 10
"At you kidding me?!" He almost screamed all that work! For a level 10 NPC!
Level can advance to: 150
Well that made him feel a little bit better, the max level for a swordsman like him was 300 though.
Job/Occupation: Priest(ess)
Age: 16
Health: 2483
Figures, priests were not ment for combat and that's way the combat people must protect the weaker members of the group like the magician and priest.
Attack damage: 50
That was just sad...
Healing rate: 50 hp every 10 seconds
Faster then he healed
Special Healing Skills: can heal 1000+ every 30 seconds will affect 50 hp (to her)
Now were talking
Can take other players damage (anytime)
Special Attack Skills: none
"So what should I name you?"
She didn't answer but looked at him cluelessly, it was kinda cute... "How about Rose? You very pretty and judging from your old name you might have thorns?" He asked then realized he shouldn't have said the last thing, he waited for her to yell at him like any other girl he knew but she just smiled happily and said "ok!" He looked at her surprised "What?" She blinked "Nothing... You can call me Caleb"
-3 hours later-
Rose smiled happily walking into the bright sunshine after exiting the shop, Caleb didn't seem to get ago well with the NPC shop keeper in the shop before so they moved to the next shop, they sold her pink kimono which Caleb asked if she was sure she wanted to sell and she did, she wouldn't miss it at all there were no good memories stored in it. Caleb had brought her (with the gold they got from selling the kimono) a gray and rather plain dress he called them 'newbie clothes' she had no idea what he ment nor did she care, she was finally out of that dark miserable forest and couldn't be happier! She smiled happily and sat down in front if the cafe waiting for Caleb he was buying something called food... Rose watched the passerbys and there were quite a lot, a couple holding hands, boys laughing and pushing each other, girls giggling and staring and pointing at boys, just lots of people passing by then someone dropped a round thing in front of her she looked up it was Caleb he took a seat, Rose looked back down at the round thing, it was a circle but flat, it was small but bigger then her palm it had lots and lots of pointy black dots jutting out and had a over all bumpy texture (cookie) "Why are you staring at the cookie?" Caleb asked amused "What else am I suppose to do with it?" She asked "eat it" Caleb smiled "?" Rose seemed to ask "Like this" he said lifting his cookie up to his mouth and taking a bite. "Now it's your turn" he said "Umm ok..." He said rising it up to her chin and shoving it in on her chin it broke in half "What happened?" Rose frowned "Like this" Caleb chuckled and got up, he put his arms around her and raised her arm with the cookie up to her mouth, then he carefully helped her press it in "now bite it" he said, she obeyed and took a huge bite. "Wow!" She gasped still chewing "It's so good!" She smiled "Close your mouth while your eating" Caleb said watching amused "Why?" She asked "it's rude" he answered "Why?" She asked "It just is" he said firmly "ok..." She mumbled and (tried to) ate the rest of her cookie.

 

[Mipuppy1]

No, not trying to hurt your feelings I liked your chapter.
Alexa is 13.
Its the easiest boss in the game it was only hard for Eroth because he didn't have the patience to get to level 3.
And he won't be in the story in real life yet...and his real life form won't be at her school yet... (Still planning, gonna write chapter 5 in the morning I'm tired)

Shouldn't they be a bit older? Because the people's that made the game think 13 year olds can't handle the pain? Maybe 16 or older 18 or older? Like a sweet sixteen when a girl is entering adulthood or 18+ for just plan adult?

 

[water1997]

Oh ok how about 15 last year of middle school?

 

[Mipuppy1]

Oh ok how about 15 last year of middle school?

(ok fine)

 

[Mipuppy1]

(ok fine)

(Waiting for next chapter)

 

[water1997]

Ok writing it now.

 

[water1997]

Chapter 5:

The next morning, I woke up to Bella screaming in my ear.
"HAPPY APRIL FOOLS DAY!" I groaned.
"Bella, you're supposed to say that after you pull a prank, not shout it in someone's ear at 5 AM while you're in your pajamas!"
"Mom told me to get you up, I'm doing what she said. Oh yeah, since I'm on spring break right now I get to go help Mom drop you off at your new school."
I sat up, shocked. "You get to WHAT?!"
"I get to drop you off at your new school!" Bella said, looking innocent, but I knew she was planning something. The last time she went with my Mom to my school, she had nearly exploded the Home Ec. classroom by "accidentally" brushing her sleeve against the stove after she'd dropped paper on it. Since it was April Fools Day, her antics would be worse. "You can come, but I have a few rules. One, you stay in the car at all times. Two, you don't tell stories about me to anyone there, kids your own age included. Three, you will be bound to these rules on pain of losing your stuffed animal collection for a week!" Bella shrieked. Her extensive stuffed animal collection made up her most prized possessions, and the thought of being away from them for a week made her shudder with horror.
"Fine I'll listen to them." Bella said, less than happy.
"Ok, now get ready to go!" I said, closing the door behind Bella as she left to go get dressed. I got in blue jeans and a gray shirt with kittens shooting lasers and the words "My Lazer Kittens Will Destroy You!" printed on it. I double checked that I had everything, and went to the car.

The car ride there was the longest one of my life, or at least it seemed that way. I dreaded the day, which would be worse because of the holiday. I was thinking about this when Mom pulled up to the school and I hopped out.
"Have a good day at school!" Like that was going to happen.

I went inside the school. It was fairly big, with metal columns placed on either side of the four glass-paneled doors leading in. Most of the kids hung around in groups because the bell hadn't rung yet, and I looked awkwardly around trying to find a place to stand. I finally went over and stood in a corner, hoping to be unnoticed by any popular kids that make fun of everyone, like there had been at my old school. It didn't work. A girl with long blond hair tied back in a braid came over.
"Little girl lost her way?" she mocked. Just because I was shorter than most 15 year olds didn't mean I was someone's little sister.
"No, in fact I'm supposed to be here." I replied cooly, trying to ignore her. Another girl that looked like a cheerleader came up behind her. "If you're supposed to be here, then why is there a note on your back that says "My name is Princess Unicorn" in pink fancy letters?" The girl with the braid asked, obviously bolder since she had backup. "My third grade sister did that!" I growled. The girl who looked like a cheerleader was about to make a stinging retort when one of the teachers came up behind her.
"Having a problem? Well please try to work it out diplomatically rather than hurling insults at each other. I'm talking specifically to you, Nevaeh and Ayala." the teacher said before leaving. Nevaeh and Ayala decided that getting on their teacher's bad side wasn't worth it, and walked away. But somehow I knew that it wasn't over.

The day zipped by until lunch, when I had no one to sit by. That seemed like an eternity of eating alone until I had the idea to draw in my free time. Drawing, my favorite activity, could help get me away from any problem. I opened a blank page in my sketchbook. For once I had no idea what to draw. Then an idea struck me and I drew slowly, not wanting to mess up a single detail. Once the lunch period was over, I had a pretty good sketch of Raven, my character from Omicron. I had to go to science, but I always could come back to it. In science, my teacher showed us a video of babies doing Gangam Style, a dance that was popular in the 2000s. She then went on to tell us that there were babies hidden around the school, and that we were going to make a video like that one in groups. I was a bit suspicious, but a blond girl with her hair back in a ponytail named Zoe asked me to be in her group, and I got excited at the prospect of actually having friends. We were almost out the door when our teacher said,
"One more thing, APRIL FOOLS!"
"It's so on." I whispered to Zoe and once we got our assignment done we passed around a sheet of paper that basically said to sign so the whole class would leave at 12:30. We got the whole class, and at 12:30, our teacher was so confused when our class started walking out of the room. "Why are you leaving?" she yelled after us. We explained that it was an April Fools joke, and she helped us plan one for the sub in next class where we switched names with someone. I went to switch with Zoe but she had already switched with someone named Ruth. She pointed me in the direction of a girl named Raiana. Raiana had shoulder length brown hair and glasses. She agreed to switch with me, and we even switched hairstyles. We told each other where we sat so we could switch seats too, then the class was over. In math, the prank went flawlessly until the sub, who had subbed for the class before (how was I supposed to know that?) discovered that Sam was not Ryan.

The rest of the day passed uneventfully, with Nevaeh or Ayala making the occasional insult, and I went home relieved that my first day hadn't been so bad. My relief was short-lived, when I heard a scream coming from my room. I raced up and saw my little sister standing in shock, Omicron open and running.

 

[Mipuppy1]

Chapter 5:

The next morning, I woke up to Bella screaming in my ear.
"HAPPY APRIL FOOLS DAY!" I groaned.
"Bella, you're supposed to say that after you pull a prank, not shout it in someone's ear at 5 AM while you're in your pajamas!"
"Mom told me to get you up, I'm doing what she said. Oh yeah, since I'm on spring break right now I get to go help Mom drop you off at your new school."
I sat up, shocked. "You get to WHAT?!"
"I get to drop you off at your new school!" Bella said, looking innocent, but I knew she was planning something. The last time she went with my Mom to my school, she had nearly exploded the Home Ec. classroom by "accidentally" brushing her sleeve against the stove after she'd dropped paper on it. Since it was April Fools Day, her antics would be worse. "You can come, but I have a few rules. One, you stay in the car at all times. Two, you don't tell stories about me to anyone there, kids your own age included. Three, you will be bound to these rules on pain of losing your stuffed animal collection for a week!" Bella shrieked. Her extensive stuffed animal collection made up her most prized possessions, and the thought of being away from them for a week made her shudder with horror.
"Fine I'll listen to them." Bella said, less than happy.
"Ok, now get ready to go!" I said, closing the door behind Bella as she left to go get dressed. I got in blue jeans and a gray shirt with kittens shooting lasers and the words "My Lazer Kittens Will Destroy You!" printed on it. I double checked that I had everything, and went to the car.

The car ride there was the longest one of my life, or at least it seemed that way. I dreaded the day, which would be worse because of the holiday. I was thinking about this when Mom pulled up to the school and I hopped out.
"Have a good day at school!" Like that was going to happen.

I went inside the school. It was fairly big, with metal columns placed on either side of the four glass-paneled doors leading in. Most of the kids hung around in groups because the bell hadn't rung yet, and I looked awkwardly around trying to find a place to stand. I finally went over and stood in a corner, hoping to be unnoticed by any popular kids that make fun of everyone, like there had been at my old school. It didn't work. A girl with long blond hair tied back in a braid came over.
"Little girl lost her way?" she mocked. Just because I was shorter than most 15 year olds didn't mean I was someone's little sister.
"No, in fact I'm supposed to be here." I replied cooly, trying to ignore her. Another girl that looked like a cheerleader came up behind her. "If you're supposed to be here, then why is there a note on your back that says "My name is Princess Unicorn" in pink fancy letters?" The girl with the braid asked, obviously bolder since she had backup. "My third grade sister did that!" I growled. The girl who looked like a cheerleader was about to make a stinging retort when one of the teachers came up behind her.
"Having a problem? Well please try to work it out diplomatically rather than hurling insults at each other. I'm talking specifically to you, Nevaeh and Ayala." the teacher said before leaving. Nevaeh and Ayala decided that getting on their teacher's bad side wasn't worth it, and walked away. But somehow I knew that it wasn't over.

The day zipped by until lunch, when I had no one to sit by. That seemed like an eternity of eating alone until I had the idea to draw in my free time. Drawing, my favorite activity, could help get me away from any problem. I opened a blank page in my sketchbook. For once I had no idea what to draw. Then an idea struck me and I drew slowly, not wanting to mess up a single detail. Once the lunch period was over, I had a pretty good sketch of Raven, my character from Omicron. I had to go to science, but I always could come back to it. In science, my teacher showed us a video of babies doing Gangam Style, a dance that was popular in the 2000s. She then went on to tell us that there were babies hidden around the school, and that we were going to make a video like that one in groups. I was a bit suspicious, but a blond girl with her hair back in a ponytail named Zoe asked me to be in her group, and I got excited at the prospect of actually having friends. We were almost out the door when our teacher said,
"One more thing, APRIL FOOLS!"
"It's so on." I whispered to Zoe and once we got our assignment done we passed around a sheet of paper that basically said to sign so the whole class would leave at 12:30. We got the whole class, and at 12:30, our teacher was so confused when our class started walking out of the room. "Why are you leaving?" she yelled after us. We explained that it was an April Fools joke, and she helped us plan one for the sub in next class where we switched names with someone. I went to switch with Zoe but she had already switched with someone named Ruth. She pointed me in the direction of a girl named Raiana. Raiana had shoulder length brown hair and glasses. She agreed to switch with me, and we even switched hairstyles. We told each other where we sat so we could switch seats too, then the class was over. In math, the prank went flawlessly until the sub, who had subbed for the class before (how was I supposed to know that?) discovered that Sam was not Ryan.

The rest of the day passed uneventfully, with Nevaeh or Ayala making the occasional insult, and I went home relieved that my first day hadn't been so bad. My relief was short-lived, when I heard a scream coming from my room. I raced up and saw my little sister standing in shock, Omicron open and running.

(Sorry was gone yesterday, I my internet decided to die)

 

[water1997]

(It's fine, but can you post the next chapter? Please?)

 

[Mipuppy1]

(It's fine, but can you post the next chapter? Please?)

(Working on it, my dad grounded me so mad at him right now...)