~The Shadow's Omen~ My story please read :)

[OwlLover]

I just finished reading your story, IT WAS SSOOOOOOOO GOOD! i have never read anything as good as that! do you have the next chapter??????????

Thanks! Yes, I do, I'm gonna post it here in a sec!

 

[OwlLover]

Chapter 5

The wolf stiffened as she saw Sorrelfur peeking over the rock, "Guys, it's back," she hissed. The mountain lion and gryphon saw the kitten at the same time the wolf spoke. The mountain lion unsheathed her claws, the gryphon and wolf bristled, and a thin layer of frost formed on the grass.

Rocky looked at Sorrelfur, bewildered. "What happened between you four?"

"They're the same creatures that chased me," Sorrelfur said quietly, shrinking back.

Rocky turned his head back over to the three creatures, snarling. "Back away," he warned the three creatures, the fur along his spine beginning to prickle.

"Why?" The gryphon demanded, "She's Thunder's ally."

"How do you know?" Rocky shot back.

"For one, she reeks of Thunder," the gryphon replied coolly, "Second, she tried to invade my cave yesterday and eavesdrop on our conversation."

Rocky rolled his eyes, "You know why she smelled like him? We had encountered him just hours before. Second, she did not try to invade your cave. She was tired and was going to rest there for a little while."

"So you say," the wolf sniffed. "That does not necessarily mean it's true."

Rocky scoffed with irritation, rolling his eyes again. "What does it take to convince you idiots? You have no strong evidence whatsoever that she is dark. How do you know that she was trying to eavesdrop?"

"She kept coming in and acted aggressive when we shooed her out," the mountain lion said.

"You did not shoo her out," Rocky growled, "you flung her into a tree!"

"Listen, it doesn't matter what I did to her yesterday," the gryphon growled. "She's a possible spy, and she needs to be dealt with."

"Possible?" Rocky was now incensed. "You're willing to murder a kitten who cannot fight back simply because she is a possible," he mocked the gryphon's voice, "spy? The guardians would be ashamed of you!" He spat. "She has a brother!"

"I had one of my family members taken from me at a young age," the gryphon said calmly. "I survived."

It took every ounce of willpower for Rocky to not lunge for the gryphon. "Do you realize how selfish that sounds, you moron? This cat is innocent! I honestly don't give a mouse tail about whatever happened to you, I will not let an innocent cat be killed!"

The gryphon considered this for a minute. "Well, as long as she doesn't barge into my cave again. I'm Lana, the wolf is Skylar, and the mountain lion is Faina."

Sorrelfur hesitantly began to pad out from behind the rock. "It's alright," Lana said, "you don't have anything to be afraid of now." Sorrelfur resisted the urge to hiss at the gryphon.

The gryphon turned her attention back to Rocky. "So, will you be coming with us?"

"Yes," Rocky said, "we're just waiting for Foxshadow and North to come back."

***

A little while later North and Foxshadow came back, and Rocky explained to them what they were going to do. Lana lead the way into the valley, with Faina and Skylar close behind. Eventually they reached a bunch of boulders blocking a narrow passage in the valley; Skylar traveled into their shadows and disappeared. Appearing on the other side, she pushed the two boulders apart, opening the passage. Lana went in first, then Faina and North. Sorrelfur was reluctant to follow them.

"It's alright," Rocky encouraged her. "They won't hurt you. If they do, North and I will take care of it." Sorrelfur then padded after Foxshadow into the passage.

Behind the boulders was a large clearing; Lana was talking to a small golden campine chicken and a large black horse. The chicken turned her head over to Rocky, North, Sorrelfur, and Foxshadow. "Hi!" She said cheerily, but after a few moments her expression turned to that of disappointment. "Lana says that you are looking for the guardians. I'm very sorry, but I don't know where they are. But," her expression became more hopeful, "the grandfather tree may know."

"The grandfather tree?" Foxshadow asked, "What's that?"

"A large tree," Suzie said as she began to walk, "He was once surrounded by a forest. But during a huge frost, all the other trees died. That's why it's mostly empty here. He talks to me sometimes, and he may be able to help us find the guardians."

"A talking tree?" Storm muttered, "She's loony..." North gave him a warning look.

"Wow!" Foxshadow was astonished as they came upon a huge tree. "Is this it?!"

"Yes," Suzie nodded, the corners of her beak curling up in amusement at Foxshadow's awe. Nyght, the massive black horse, stood beside the Suzie. The smallest branch of the tree was at least two times Nyght's size. Suzie unfurled her wings and flew up to Nyght's back, then flew up to the lowest branch. Hopping towards the massive trunk, she lightly tapped her beak on the bark. "Grandfather tree," she murmured, before she sat down and closed her eyes, her beak still leaning on the trunk.

"What's she doing?" Foxshadow asked.

"Hush!" Lana hissed, "She's dreaming with the grandfather tree. Be quiet, or you'll wake her up!"

Foxshadow lowered his head.

After several long minutes, Suzie lifted her head. "The grandfather tree cannot find the guardians," she said grimly, her voice tight. "There's a power neutralizer surrounding their general area. He was blocked."

Sorrelfur's eyes widened, "then that means..." Her voice trailed off, as if she couldn't dare say what was next.

"The guardians have been captured."

"How could this happen?" Nyght's powerful voice was spiked with distress. "The guardians are the most powerful creatures in all of Rainea!"

"That we know of," North added grimly.

Sorrelfur swiveled her ears around as she heard the grass rustle. "Wait, what was that?"

 

[OwlLover]

Better picture of Sorrelfur-

Suzie-

Nyght-

 

[moriah6299]

I love this story it's so amazing

 

[OwlLover]

Thanks

 

[moriah6299]

How many chapters do you plan on doing?

 

[OwlLover]

A lot; I mainly just write on the fly when ideas come in my head. These first few are based off the RP itself but around Chapter 8 it'll get quite different.

 

[OwlLover]

Bump

 

[OwlLover]

Who wants a new chapter?

 

[moriah6299]

Make a new chapter please!!!!