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[Broken]

*muffled giggle*
I should have you guys do Dix, he is one of my old PM RP characters. Me and MH would probably crack up. Dix was such a romantic goofball.

 

[beauh]

Beauh:
Well, a good RP has to have a good idea, information, storyline and a relevant title. Most animal RPs have been done several times and it gets a bit repetitive (I'm not saying its impossible, though).
Sometimes a combination of ideas turns out well, sometimes it doesn't. It's a hit-and-miss.
I'm guessing that you want us to join your RPs. I (and I'm guessing everyone else, but I dunno) only join RPs that I think I would enjoy RPing in. Otherwise there's just no point. If people aren't joining your RPs, maybe it's because you need more experience at RPing before you make your own. I have made many RPs in the past and only one is currently used.

Thanks-----------see how my new one turns out----p:-

 

[NixNoodleNumbat]

Hey everyone!
Fellow critics, could you please critique Dangelves and Deerwood? I asked Zin to do them a while ago (I'm certainly not blaming you, Zin, they are very long and good critiques take time!), but I thought I'd ask the others.

 

[TechnoCat]

Fellow critiques, could you critique my EagleClan RP?

 

[HollyBird24]

She's exactly who really needs to join. I won't force her into it if she doesn't want to, though.

I'l love to join

 

[miss heny]

ya, i am surprised tho that he and angel didnt kill each other ducky LOL

 

[Zinnia-Hen]

Hey everyone!
Fellow critics, could you please critique Dangelves and Deerwood? I asked Zin to do them a while ago (I'm certainly not blaming you, Zin, they are very long and good critiques take time!), but I thought I'd ask the others.

I'll do them sometime in the next 24 hours, I promise. So sorry I couldn't get to them in time.

 

[Yoki]

I'll do them sometime in the next 24 hours, I promise. So sorry I couldn't get to them in time.

Eh, no wukkas (from Nix).
ETA: She can't edit the threads at the mo anyway, so it's not that big of a deal.

 

[Broken]

ya, i am surprised tho that he and angel didnt kill each other ducky LOL

Daw Dix loved that girl from the time she got ticked off when all he was in was pants, and all his muscleymuscles were showing

 

[TechnoCat]