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[miss heny]

Later on tonight I'll do reveiws

 

[ChicknsRock]

Quote: ( Please can you check this?)

 

[miss heny]

.... okay, funny request here... but if we don't get your post the first round please bump by saying something on the lines of 'I believe you forgot this... please can you check this?' Bumping will get you in trouble and posting bumping might drive people away due to not understanding why such and such post is being bumped.

MH

 

[horselover2001]

Quote:
I'm not ignoring you, but it's Zinnia's call.
Okay!

 

[miss heny]

Okay... I can do a RP

 

[Chickenfan4life]

Please do mine.

 

[miss heny]

Trying to..... phone nots letting me copy....

Okay, nice story but is have a very basic plot, where the antagonist? Is it survival or a rival herd? The rules are great.... but the color choices hurt my eyes.... like the basic picture for each herd land but pitty no map to explain the bounders, the form is good for this type of RP.

 

[Chickenfan4life]

I'm guessing you're not talking about mine? XD

 

[miss heny]

No XD ChicknsRock's best tag that...

 

[ChicknsRock]

Can i be a critic?