*claps* :'DA mysterious disease has wiped out the human race. The few survivors are mutated. They are now werewolves, werecats, werefoxes, and a few shapeshifters. It has been over 3,000 years since then, and now the planet is alive again. There are many Creatures now. They live in harmony together as one tribe. All are lead by the Alphas, the Alphas take care of any major problems. Police take care of other problems.
The first thing I want to suggest is to make your front page more attractive. Theres very little color and it looks messy and disorganized. If you look at the front page of The Story of my Life or Avalon, the front page has color and its well organized. This story seems very repetative, I feel like I've seen it before. You already had a werewolf/werecat roleplay which died off, this idea is very similar, why not trying something different? Unique? I do see some potential in this, but you need to develop the story more. This just seems very thrown together with not a lot of thought put into it.
New Moon was the first tribe that included all of the different Creatures, first led by Kidar I (Omri's ancestor.) , over 3 thousand years ago.
Rules:
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Keep any RP fights realistic, you cannot hit/miss everytime!
Keep any RL fights in PMs!
If you don't like the RP, then don't post.
If you have nothing nice to say, then don't post.
Have fun!
Your rules are very basic and not very specific. This is just me, but I am not a fan of the first rule. It may be your thread, but you have little say in who can and who cannot post on it. For the third rule, you should spell out "real life", too many abbreviations is confusing. The last two rules I really don't like, if I were a new user considering joining this RP, those two rules would really turn me off. They are very unwelcoming.
Ranks:
Alpha male (Taken)
Alpha female (Taken)
Beta male (Open)
Beta female (Open)
Heir [will be Alpha when the previous Alpha dies] (Reserved)
General of the Army (Taken)
Warrior (Unlimited)
Upper Mystic [Uses magic, and teaches the healers] (Only 5)
Lesser Mystic [Uses magic, but has less powers than an Upper Mystic] (Only 10)
Police Chief (Open)
Police Officer (Unlimited)
Bounty hunter (9 places left)
Healer (Up to 20)
Assistant Healer (Unlimited)
Head Prison guards (9 spaces left)
Guard (Unlimited)
Farmer (Unlimited)
Rancher (Unlimited) [A rancher raises cattle and other sorts of food for the Tribe]
Villager (Unlimited)
I like the thought you put into creating all these ranks, but too many ranks can be confusing on an RP. The farmers/ranchers/villagers can all be combined into one rank, same with the head guards and guards. I don't see a need for betas or so many mystics.
Form:
Name:
Rank:
Age:
Species (Shapeshifter, werewolf, werecat, werefox, etc.):
Appearance:
Personality:
Mate/Crush:
History:
Other:
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I wouldn't have the mate/crush space, when people are first joining they won't have a mate/crush unless its another character RPed by the same player.
Characters:
Name: Omri McCartney
Rank: Alpha Male
Age: 25
Species (Shapeshifter, werewolf, werecat, werefox, etc.): Werewolf
Appearance: Tall, muscular, handsome. He is bigger than most.
Personality: Kind, wise, would die for his Tribe, fearless, compassionate.
Mate/Crush: Viridi
History: His family have been the Alphas ever since the Humans were wiped out. He was taught to honor the ancient ways, and ask the spirits of his ancestors for help if he needed it.
Other: Is 10x stronger than most of the other werewolves. When angered, his claws sharpen and can become tipped with poison.
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Username: LittleLady98
Definantly a Gary Sue. This character is large, 10x muscular, kind, wise, fearless, compassionate, poison tipped claws etc. Not very interesting.
Name: Viridi
Rank: Alpha Female (If Availiable if not then a warrior)
Age: 17
Species (Shapeshifter, werewolf, werecat, werefox, etc.): Werewolf
Personality: Very calming and nice. She is fearless and brave. She believes in peace.
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Username: IMMASHEIK
Mary Sue. Not nearly enough information, especially since this character is important (the alpha female).
Name: Eric Kingsman
Rank: Warrior
Age: 22
Species (Shapeshifter, werewolf, werecat, werefox, etc.): Weretiger
Appearance: See pics
Personality: Fearless, brave, caring, merciful.
Mate/Crush: None yet
History: He grew up in New Moon, and was one of the best when it came to his fighting skills. He never really knew his parents, because they dropped him off at Kimdar Training school when he was very young.
Other: Can do a little bit of air bending. Is close friends with the Alphas.
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Username: LittleLady98
Gary Sue
Name: Diana Sperling
Rank: Assistant Healer
Age: 20
Species (Shapeshifter, werewolf, werecat, werefox, etc.): Werewolf
Appearance: See pic
Personality: Very sweet, caring. Firm with her patients.
Mate/Crush: None yet.
History: She was the only daughter of an Upper Mystic, and was trained in healing. She didn't attend Kimdar Training school because she didn't want to be a warrior.
Other: Has a natural gift for healing.
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Username: LittleLady98
Name: Marcus Remini
Rank: Head Prison Guard
Age: 32
Species (Shapeshifter, werewolf, werecat, werefox, etc.): Werebear
Appearance: See-pic
Personality: Harsh, can get angered easily, is nice only to the alphas
Mate/Crush: Unknown
History: He has always been alone, no one ever speaks to him which caused his anti-social behavior.
Other: He is skilled in hand-to-hand combat.
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Username: armdchicken
Name: Maddie Cooper
Rank: Villager
Age: 21
Species (Shapeshifter, werewolf, werecat, werefox, etc.): werefox
Appearance: See Pic
Personality: Cunning, she doesn't talk much, and she can be nice when it benefits her.
Mate/Crush: Unknown
History: Her parents were killed and she was living off the streets. She had to steal to live.
Other: She is very good at stealing things and is always trying to steal.
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Username: armdchicken
Name: Wynona Marquis
Rank: Army General
Age: 33
Species (Shapeshifter, werewolf, werecat, werefox, etc.): Werecow (( rofl. ))
Appearance: Although she is built like a tank, and stands at a towering 6'9, she still possesses some feminine beauty and charm in her kind green eyes, and flowing mane. She wears heavy battle armour.
Personality: Headstrong and demanding, will not allow anyone or anything to get in her way. She is so loyal to her tribe that she would die for it. She is, however, easily angered. Especially if disobeyed.
Mate/Crush: None at the moment.
History: She lived in a tribe of her type that lived much like Native Americans. After growing older and succeeding in her warrior training, she left in search of a new form of life.
Other: N/A
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Username: Zinnia-Hen
Name: Seth Ramis
Rank: Warrior
Age: 35
Species (Shapeshifter, werewolf, werecat, werefox, etc.): Minotaur
Appearance: Extremely large, very muscular, and surprisingly handsome. He is at least 7'5'' tall. His dusty grey fur is usually covered by armor. He always carries his ax with him.
Personality: Tough, but kind. He would die before giving up in a fight.
Mate/Crush: He would never admit it, but he has a crush on Wynona.
History: The only thing anyone knows is that he was left on the doorstep of the training school. He grew up there, and was the strongest student.
Other: None.
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Username: LittleLady98
Gary Sue
Name: Kalista Maldives V of Whitebluff
Rank: Villager
Age: 18
Species (Shapeshifter, werewolf, werecat, werefox, etc.): Werewolf
Appearance: See picture
Personality: A bit of a spoiled, overly feminine brat.
Mate/Crush: None at the time.
History: Kalista grew up far away in a small, secluded kingdom as a Princess. Eventually, she was kicked out by the court for being an immature tyrant. She is now seeking refuge with the New Moon tribe.
Other: She often uses her attractive appearance as an excuse.
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Username: Zinnia-Hen
Name: Sir Alexander Uenda of Whitebluff
Rank: Villager
Age: 27
Species (Shapeshifter, werewolf, werecat, werefox, etc.): Weretiger
Appearance: Some say he's a little boy trapped in a manly-man's body. He is quite slim.
Personality: Nervous, always wishing to please Kalista and the Alphas. Quite the coward as well.
Mate/Crush: He only has eyes for Kalista, whom he serves. Though they are not mates, he has a large amount of love for her. Alexander simply does not want to admit it, as he knows the woman he serves isn't interested in him.
History: He lived in the same kingdom as Kalista, and came with her when she was banished.
Other: N/A
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Username: Zinnia-Hen
Name: Jack Farley
Rank: Rancher/Villager
Age: 24
Species (Shapeshifter, werewolf, werecat, werefox, etc.): Anthro Horse
Appearance: Tall, rugged handsome looks, muscular, and pretty large.
Personality: Kind, caring, firm. He would make a great warrior, but he doesn't like to fight.
Mate/Crush: None yet.
History: He grew up in New Moon. He was an orphan, but didn't let his hard life stop him from becoming a wealthy rancher.
Other: Volunteers to help others.
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Username: LittleLady98
Name: Jessica Glade
Rank: Villager
Age: 21
Species (Shapeshifter, werewolf, werecat, werefox, etc.): Anthro Horse
Appearance: Very beautiful, tall, slender.
Personality: Very sweet, kind, caring, and lovable.
Mate/Crush: None yet.
History: She was raised normally in the valley with her people, but a sickness swept through, ans almost everyone in her village died. She escaped before catching the sickness, and came to New Moon.
Other: None.
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Username: LittleLady98
Mary Sue
Name: Kenai Vanas
Rank: Warrior
Age: 17
Species (Shapeshifter, werewolf, werecat, werefox, etc.): Werewolf
Appearance: See pic
Personality: Very quiet, never says much.
Mate/Crush: None yet
History: He was a rebel before going to the training school. He didn't listen to anyone.
Other: None.
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Username: LittleLady98
Not enough information
Name: Shane Havan
Rank: Warrior
Age: 18
Species (Shapeshifter, werewolf, werecat, werefox, etc.): Werewolf
Appearance: See pic.
Personality: Stays away from others, bitter. He seems to have no emotions, always cold as a stone.
Mate/Crush: None yet
History: He grew up in a brutal home, his mother killed his father, and abused him. He would get beaten until he bled, often getting knocked out. Since then, he has a high tolerance for pain. It seems like nothing hurts him.
Other: None.
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Username: LittleLady98
Name: Joseph Fyre
Rank: Warrior
Age: 16
Species (Shapeshifter, werewolf, werecat, werefox, etc.): Werepanther
Appearance: See pic
Personality: Mysterious, hard, merciless.
Mate/Crush: None yet
History: He lost his arm when he was little, while fighting a bear. His arm was replaced with a titanium steel mechanical arm.
Other: none.
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Username: LittleLady98
Name: Trevor Hawke
Rank: Warrior/Bounty hunter
Age: 23
Species (Shapeshifter, werewolf, werecat, werefox, etc.): Werewolf
Appearance: Tall, very muscular. He is very handsome, yet fearsome.
Personality: Very kind, honorable, has a lot of patience, caring, aways helping others.
Mate/Crush: He kind of likes Kalista, but he hates the fact that she is spoiled.
History: He grew up at the Kimdar Training School. He was an orphan, and grew up with his brother.
Other: Darin is his brother.
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Username: LittleLady98
Name: Darin Hawke
Rank: Warrior
Age: 24
Species (Shapeshifter, werewolf, werecat, werefox, etc.): Werewolf
Appearance: See pic.
Personality: Harsh, uncaring, merciless. He is the opposite of his brother.
Mate/Crush: None.
History: Same as Trevor's.
Other: Trevor is his brother.
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Username: LittleLady98
Name: Caspian Marito
Rank: Sailor/Warrior
Age: 25
Species (Shapeshifter, werewolf, werecat, werefox, etc.): Werelion
Appearance: Tall, handsome, muscular. His wavy, white mane and fur makes his startling blue eyes stand out.
Personality: Very kind, but tough from years of being at sea. He never lets weakness show.
Mate/Crush: None really, because he's usually out at sea.
History: He grew up in Kimdar Training School, but he became a sailor instead of an official warrior.
Other: none.
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Username: LittleLady98
Name: Jesse Baros
Rank: Warrior
Age: 13
Species (Shapeshifter, werewolf, werecat, werefox, etc.): Werelion
Appearance: Tall, lean, his right eye is covered by a cloth because of a large scar.
Personality: Kind, but tough. He shows potential to be a great general when he grows up.
Mate/Crush: None, he thinks that girls are "yucky".
History: He is being raised by his grandfather, Sparta, as he has already completed his warrior training.
Other: Sparta Baros is his grandfather. Jacob Garros is his best friend. He has been called a child prodigy because of his superior fighting skills.
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Username: LittleLady98
Name: Sparta Baros
Rank: Warrior-retired
Age: 58
Species (Shapeshifter, werewolf, werecat, werefox, etc.): Werelion
Appearance: Powerful, large, fearsome. He stands at a towering 6'11, and can strike fear into the heart of even the bravest warrior. A large scar goes from his hairline, across his eye, and to his cheek. Even though he is retired, he always wears his armor.
Personality: Can seem harsh and uncaring, but he really is nice. He thinks things through, and never acts rashly.
Mate/Crush: Dead.
History: He doesn't like to talk about it.
Other: Jesse is his grandson. He is pretty wealthy, and tends to spoil his grandson sometimes. But teaches Jesse that for every treat, he has to train for an hour.
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Username: LittleLady98
Name: Troy Garros
Rank: Warrior
Age: 32
Species (Shapeshifter, werewolf, werecat, werefox, etc.): Werelion
Appearance: See pic.
Personality: Harsh at times, caring, stern. He won't tolerate disrespect.
Mate/Crush: His wife was exiled for treason.
History: He became a warrior when he was 15, and never looked back. His past was troubled, he grew up in a poor home, with little water and less food. He was the eldest of 5, and had to take care of his younger siblings when his parents died. All of his siblings either ran away from his strict rules, or died of sickness.
Other: Jacob Garros is his son.
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Username: LittleLady98
Name: Preston "Romeo" Feris
Rank: Villager
Age: 22
Species (Shapeshifter, werewolf, werecat, werefox, etc.): Werelion
Appearance: See pic.
Personality: Flirty. He likes to try to use his good looks to get out of trouble.
Mate/Crush: Any beautiful girl.
History: He never talks about it.
Other: None.
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Username: LittleLady98
Not enough information, just because he never talks about it doesn't mean he doesn't have a history at all.
Name: Jacob Garros
Rank: Warrior-in-training
Age: 14
Species (Shapeshifter, werewolf, werecat, werefox, etc.): Werelion
Appearance: Tall, lanky, he has a short, curly brown mane and brown eyes.
Personality: Even though he is popular with the girls, he prefers to focus on his training. He believes that there will be time for girls once he older, and has completed his training.
Mate/Crush: None.
History: He is growing up normally, except for the fact that his mother was exiled for treason against the Alphas.
Other: Troy Garros is his father. Jesse Baros is his best friend.
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Username: LittleLady98
Name: Ethan Drakus
Rank: Warrior
Age: 38
Species (Shapeshifter, werewolf, werecat, werefox, etc.): Anthro Dragon
Appearance: Formidable. See pic.
Personality: Hard-hearted, cold-blooded, ruthless. He cares about no one.
Mate/Crush: None
History: He came to New Moon soon after his warrior training was complete.
Other: Spikes grow in his knuckles, and he is not afraid to harm anyone.
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Username: LittleLady98
Name: Molly
Rank: Warrior
Age: 17
Species (Shapeshifter, werewolf, werecat, werefox, etc.): Werefox
Appearance: Look at her pic
Personality: Shes sweet and shy, but can be violent and enjoys fighting
Mate/Crush: None
History: She doesnt like to talk about it
Other: None
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Username: CochinBrahmaLover
Name: Rakan (his nickname is Insanity)
Rank: He was a warrior before he went mad.
Age: Unknown
Species: Werewolf
Appearance: See pic
Personality: Insane, random.
Mate/Crush: None
History: No one knows for sure, but some say that he ate a toxic plant, causing the insanity. He wandered into New Moon after he was insane.
Other: None
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Username: LitteLady98
Places and distances:
Safe Haven - It's location is only known by the Alphas.
Daktia City - A big city near the ocean, they often trade fish and shells for meat and furs.
Dakarria - A big city in the heart of the tribe, they often trade with Daktia City.
Haedarr - The Capital, impregnable, and safe.
Nothing is impregnable, there is always a way
Kimdar Training School - A stone, impregnable fortress that houses the children until they graduate.
Lost Canyon - The place where traitors and criminals are sent. It is impossible to find one's way out of the giant, maze-like canyon.
Elder's Peak - The place where important meetings and ceremonies are held.
Dead Wolf's End - The place where judgement is dealt to a traitor/criminal. A thin line goes from the End to Lost Canyon, and the Entrance can only be opened from the outside.
Distances:
Dakarria to Haedarr - 207 miles, 3-5 days.
Dakarria to Kimdar Training School - 6 miles, 3 hours.
Daktia City to Dakarria - 400 miles, 10 days.
Haedarr to Dakarria - 70 miles, 3 days.
Haedarr to Daktia City - 470 miles, 13 days.
Haedarr to Kimdar Training School - Kimdar Training School is right next to Haedarr.
Daktia City to Kimdar Training School - 490 miles, 15 days.
Herbs and uses/Illnesses:
http://wolvhenworld.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=ttk&action=display&thread=14
Overall this RP needs some work. The idea is there, but you need to expand on it and make it better. You have a lot of characters, but most of them are pretty slapped together with not a lot of thought put into them. Think quality, not quantity. Good luck!
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