would any one rate my web site

[silkiechicken]

Oh 16. You should know your grammar by then. I know my grammar is really bad, but by that time you should be at least writing sentences. At 16 you should also know about plagiarism. If you can't do it on your assignments, chances are that's just the start of what you can't do in real life.

 

[PurpleChicken]

Keep up the good work. I'm impressed by a 16 year old who
wants a hatchery business of there own.

Please also remember everyone here wants to help you so
don't get upset when we criticise your work or grammer.
Everything can be fixed.

Try typing your stuff into Microsoft Word. It will help you clean
up your grammer. Then cut and paste it into the web page.
It's sorta cheating but it will help in the short term.

 

[silkiechicken]

If you have a tutor center at your school, you could take it to them too to proof read before you post it too.

 

[siamshirl]

well weres ur website silkie chicken do you have one let me grade you come on lets see how many mistakes i can find

 

[silkiechicken]

I don't have a website and I don't think I was grading you. You asked for comments and I provided some. I didn't even correct any of your grammar. Sorry. Guess I am done here.

 

[siamshirl]

ba bye now

 

[Royicus]

Quote:
Watch yourself. Don't get testy with the long time members. It won't do you any good. You wanted feedback, you got feedback. Your website was pretty, and that was about it.

And by the way, silkiechicken is a very talented lady and could make an awesome website if she wanted too. Unfortunately, most of her time is spent in a research lab so she doesn't have the time, and that isn't an interest of hers so she doesn't have the will. But rest assured, whatever she does, she does an awesome job.


Hmph.

 

[siamshirl]

what ever lol im really scared now should i hide

 

[DuckLady]

Siamshirl, that will do.
You asked for help and you got many good suggestions. Please be polite.
Thank you.

 

[siamshirl]

Thanks to everyone for responding to my niece on her first web site...your advice and comments even to the point of including your advice for a tutor is commendable...must be a common occurrence people making comments on education I am so overwhelmed with the advice. I have never had such a response as they say people who have gone through a program IE....being tutored themselves at one time or another would be able to give good advice. I do hope in the future when you ask someone for some advice on a project that you yourself know little or nothing about you get the same responses and Christian attitude that you gave my niece...Please have a blessed day and once again thanks a bunch for your advice