Writing a story in a chicken's eyes! UPDATE Pg. 75!

[MEchickenfarmer33]

 

[ChickLover98]

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Even though it only lasted a couple of minutes, it seems like eternity! Flower held me down, even harder, her sharp claws, piercing into my skin. I want to yell out in pain, but why give Flower the satisfaction?
"Cloudy! Do you need us to help you?" I hear Lilly call out to me.
Yes, in fact, I do. But, I really don't want to involve my friends, taking a risk that they could get hurt. That would be the worst thing, and I would never forgive myself.
Plus, my pride and ego won't accept help. I want to fight my own battles, thank you very much!
"Cloudy?" Onyx yells, concern in his voice. I can't die now, especially not in front of Nyx! Help!
"I'm... Fine..." I choke out. That's a lie.
I twist my body, but Flower's claws dig deeper into my wings. There's not much I can do now, laying on my back. I stare up at Flower's angry face. She's snarling and she looks so gruesome.
"Give it up. It's no use to fight back," Flower snarls.
"No!" I yell, defiantly.
She just rolls her eyes at me.
"Ok then," she says, putting all of her weight on my wings. It hurts like nothing has ever hurt before.
I cringe and I know that there's nothing that I can do. I'm going to die. I see blood pouring out of my left wing and I start to panic. I look frantically back and forth. I feel like screaming and kicking, but that would just make Flower angrier. This really is the end, isn't it? Please, make it fast!
I close my eyes, ready to give up.
"Cloudy, don't give up! You can do it!" Primrose cheers.
"Please, Clouds," Onyx encourages.
"I..." I squeak.
"Don't worry! I'll help you!" Onyx yells to me.
"No, Nyx, please!" I suddenly call out. I don't want him involved, He's going to think I'm a wimp if I don't do this on my own. Can things get any worse?

((MORE TO COME AFTER HOMEWORK))

 

[LadyGinger]

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[fishnet1971]

 

[Rhodies Rock]

Nooo!!!!! Another cliffhanger! Hurry up with your homework!
Okay just kidding I have a TON of homework every day and I procrastinate in addition to the homework so I completely understand.
Great addition to the story, can't wait for more!

 

[The Red Rooster]

I hope Cloudy wins!

 

[Symphony]

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Well, matbe she wanted something silly,

Listen: I'll say this one more time, and one only.

THIS STORY IS NOT TRUE!!! It's a thing called pecking order. If Jasper was at the bottom, yes, the other roos would be dominent. Jasper has his own flock now, and is perfectly healthy enough to fight off a hawk to protect his flock. You'd be surprised to see how roosters transform into flock protectors when something threatens their flock. As for the rock thing, she picked it up in her beak and swung her head, therefore, throwing the rock.

Thanks!

Anyway, yes, another chapter is arriving momentarily. Also, thanks for the suggestions on how to make Clouds and Nyx have kids!

I think you should say that their mates now, and their trying to raise a brood, or something like that.

And yeah, ever single rooster has that instink.

 

[AccentOnHakes]

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Cloudy and Nyx are Cochins.

Hmm, somehow I was thinking about Jasper. Oops!

 

[The Red Rooster]

Wheres my story? JK! I know how it can be..

 

[OwlLover]

Hurry up, or I'll send the Cloudy Onyx force on you!