Writing School

[RiverStorm]

Ok yeah Sary can give critism bc you're on my level as well hhh
just spelling errors I see

*That moment when a great writer says you're on the same level as her*

 

[HeavensHens88]

*slaps*
YOU MUCH BETTER
wait plan
me n you
run dis
togefer

*aggressive rebuttal slapping*
NO U
better plan because I am student
get discord to work.

 

[RiverStorm]

n o

COME ON, ZEN
JUST GIVE ME CRITICISM

 

[cathloveydovey]

*aggressive rebuttal slapping*
NO U
better plan because I am student
get discord to work.

*intense punching back because slapping wont work*
o yea you should get that to work

 

[cathloveydovey]

DANGIT, ZEN
JUST GIVE ME CRITICISM

zen?

 

[HeavensHens88]

DANGIT, ZEN
JUST GIVE ME CRITICISM

I'm Connor :3

 

[RiverStorm]

zen?

It was the last words of We Could be Heroes and now a catchphrase XD

 

[HeavensHens88]

*intense punching back because slapping wont work*
o yea you should get that to work

*intense counter stabbing*
I rly shud

 

[Amer]

girl you on my level
Im no good at critiquing writing thats better/on the same level as mine

Oh tanks.
I thought you would assume my abilities were less because I write shorter rp posts, but that's cause I like reading short ones anyways.
Instead of repetitive long works.

 

[cathloveydovey]

*That moment when a great writer says you're on the same level as her*

but im garbage tho