WV Spring ChickenStock Sat. April 24 8-12 TSC Martinsburg

Couldn't make it last year, so I am going to be there in April!
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only thing is....at the bottom where you put "are" .... change it to "is"

it says "....by local breeders and are associated..."
it should be "....by local breeders and is associated...'
 
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That's basically saying We is associated ...
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I think I had it right. We are local breeders who are associated... I think that's right... now you have me guessing.
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This event is organized by local breeders and are associated with an online club.

ok ^ that is what you wrote

The way you have it, for it to make sense it would have to say "These" instead of "This" and then the "is" changed to an "are"
Both the "is" and "are" need to be the same tense...so either both is or both are

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now take out ur (i think prepositional?) phrase and then see how it sounds
This event are associated with an online club?
no
This event is associated with an online club

now you can ad the rest.
This event is organized by local breeders and is associated with an online club.

The subject we are talking about is This > which is single
These is plural therefore you would need a plural verb...are
but it is single so u need a single verb>is

Just listen to me...my fingers hurt n im tired
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The event is single so.. "is" and the breeders are plural so ..."are"

local breeders who is affiliated???

eta: I re-read it and, yes, it does sound strange.
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I changed it to "whom are affiliated" because my head want to explode!! ahahahahhahahah
 
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