This is thorough and helpful, but needs photos to show what a prolapsed cloaca looks like and progression of improvement.
You could also add an itemized list somewhere to make it easier for someone who may need to purchase the things needed, such as vaseline, Epsom salts, etc.
If you have links to outside or other sources regarding prolapsed cloaca's, those can be helpful too and can be pasted in.
I'll change my rating once you get this spruced up!
It's incomplete if we have to click elsewhere as we're reading along. The photos should go with what you're saying. Just insert them before or after each paragraph or subject.