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[NickyKnack]

They could hear by the sound of footfalls that they were being chased. Joleen was looking down streets trying to find a way out of this.

 

[Twistedfeather]

"Where's Batman when you need him?" Joleen replied "I thought you didn't believe in fictional characters." replied her brother, she deserved that one.

 

[NickyKnack]

"Lets survive first! Then we'll worry about witty comebacks." Joleen stated dryly. Her brother, only stuck his tongue out at her, in response to her statement.

 

[Twistedfeather]

They cut a corner and the before they could say we're safe they were cut off by three tall figures obviously there for a reason.

 

[NickyKnack]

They froze in their tracks. Joleen looked up at the new threat. shocked by the abrupt confrontation. That's when she was aware that the others had caught up behind them. They were in effect sandwiched in.

 

[Twistedfeather]

They closed in threateningly Joleen held tightly to her little brother who did not argue.

 

[NickyKnack]

She held her brother tightly, but only as a distraction. What she really wanted was the metal fighter jet toy, that her brother had in his backpack. she slowly unzipped the zipper and reached in and positioned it in her hand just right. It's sharp point could do some damage, if it came to that.

 

[Chook-Girl]

Jolee squeezed the jet tight in her hand and her heart was beating hard. She jumped quickly to the closest man. Slashing randomly, she leaped and smashing the jet in his head knocked him unconscious. Two other figures briskly walked forward, but Jolee was too fast for them. She yelled ''RUN!'' and ran away as fast as she could.

 

[NickyKnack]

They made it out of the alleyway, finally making it back into the general populace. Joleen still had no idea who the robe figures were or what they wanted with them. she look down at your hand that still clutched the toy. It had begun to trimmer with adrenaline. she really hoped they learned their lesson, but something told her they weren't done with them yet.

 

[Twistedfeather]

"Don't stop for anything?" Joleen gasped. "Not even for pedestrians?" It was like Joleen's brother to make an obvious comment like that.