I like both birds..OK.. If he is heavy feathered in the tail the weight might pull it down better. I still think you should give it a shot. A judge who puts hands on can tell you what you need. You have a nice start. Good flat shoulders, nice slope, good curves..not crazy about the tails. Nice pictures of them. If you have a human scale you can use that...weigh a box, place the bird in and reweigh the box. Subtract the box weight.