Banties! [my chicken story]

[equinehugger3]

Ick!!! I just read over this, and I just saw all the typos I had!!!

That bugs me...

 

[equinehugger3]

Oh, wow! Look how far we've come! 4 pages, 30 (Now 31!) posts... Sadly, this is the biggest thread I've ever created! Let's make it bigger!

lol Thanks guys, you've helped me a LOT!

"Chunk" 5






"Oh my gosh, Estelle, we're not going to get anywhere if we just aimlessly walk around," Milla complained. I agreed, but I was so inspired by finding those notes from our friends that I didn't want to give up yet. Caly gave Milla the "come on, don't stomp down her hopes" look, thinking I didn't see. Well, if they thought we were hopeless, that was fine. I knew we'd find them.

We walked into a very dense part of the forest. I wasn't even sure if a normal food person could squeeze through the spaces between these trees. It seemed like a very monster-y place, but I doubted something so vicious and powerful could get through here. Looking up, my eyes widened. The trees seemed to go up forever, only small patches of sky broke through. That almost instantly made this creepier. I couldn't help shivering when I thought of how this reminded me of a prison. Milla and Caly were both scared too, as they were huddling against me. We kept on walking, silently. I had no clue why we didn't turn around, but it almost seemed as if something was pulling us to the center. After another mile or so, sunlight started to seep in through the spaces between the tree trunks. It almost seemed as if there were a magnet in my stomach, and it was pulling me toward the sunlight. "Guys..." My heart was beating wildly. I didn't like this, I didn't want to go there. Milla and Caly looked at me with a crazed look in their eyes. "Let's just go, Essie," Caly hummed roboticly. "What do we have to lose?" Milla said hypnotically. "Milla, last week you made fun of Demond for saying that! What's wrong with you?" I screamed and ran away. Even though I was running away, the light came closer, until it swallowed me. I screamed with terror as Milla and Caly watched, laughing.

I woke with a scream. "Jeez, Essie, what were you screaming about?" Milla looked at me funny. "Wait, what?" I had no clue what was going on. Caly squeezed my shoulder. "It was just a dream," She said in her soothing, motherly voice. "What the heck! I don't remember falling asleep!" I was more confused than I'd ever been. "You don't? You just collapsed over here five minutes ago," Milla reported. Hmm. Whatever... I didn't sleep very well last night, maybe that had just come back to me.

Suddenly, a vicious snarl sliced through the air, and my thoughts. We looked up into the tree in front of us to a great monster. She was covered in blood, with a catlike body and teeth and claws like razors. "Mountain lion..." Caly breathed. Then, from behind it, sunlight glowed through the branches.


Sorry, this one was short, dramatic, and drippy....

I need to work on this. It doesn't even have much of a plot. Anyway, hope you like it....

 

[GammaPoppyLilyFlutter]

Come on, chickies! Don't die!

 

[equinehugger3]

I noticed Banties is on the second page... We can't let that happen, right? I'll be back in twenty minutes at the absolute most with the chickies' fate!!! Wish them luck!!!

 

[equinehugger3]

One paragrph?!?!? I know right... Sorry, my laptop ran out of power and the charger is in my litely sleeping DM's room... I just quickly posted what I had... We will discover all of the banties' fate tomorrow!

"Chunk" 6
We took one look at the monster, looked at each other, and screamed. Stereotypical, yes, but what else could we do? The monster snarled, and walked toward us, one paw in front of the other. It lightly jumped to the ground in front of us. Poor Milla's eyes widened with rage and fear. She screamed loudly, grabbed a thick branch, and smacked the astonished cat in between the eyes. The cat froze with shock for a moment, then screamed terribly in our faces. We ran.

 

[The Turken Lady]

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[equinehugger3]

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Lol

 

[equinehugger3]

I guess I'll pry my eyes open long enough to write this... Hope you like it!

"Chunk" 7

I was wondering how it was even possible for Milla to pick up that branch when the monster's blood-curdling scream awakened me. I ran, but I had no clue how I was going to survive, or why this dumb cat would even care about a couple chickens. It could climb, so the tree escape like with the foxes wasn't going to work, and running on foot wouldn't keep us alive for another ten minutes, and time wasn't about to stop now. The mountain lion was just running at an easy jog, and we were running as fast as we could. "DARN it, stupid cat!" I A, terrified. My heart was about to beat out of my chest.

All of the sudden, the cat scooped me, the closest to her, up into her mouth by my feet. I screamed, swaying to the beat of her run. She increased her speed two more times, scooping Caly and Milla up too. We all swung by our feet to the three-beat rhythm. "Take a deep breath, breathe the anger out... Out... Breathe in, breathe out," Caly instructed herself, and I silently joined in. "Now isn't the time for your stupid Yoga breathing tricks, Caly! Now is the time to defeat this stupid cat!" Milla tried to lift her fist upward, accidentally smacking the great cat's jaw. She snarled, and turned her head, about to turn around. Just then, the mountain lion whipped her head around, and she ran right into a tree, head on. She fell to the ground, unconscious. We all loosened her teeth from our ankles and ran as fast as we could, away from the cat. We felt relieved, but we had no idea of what was ahead.




Night guys! *snore*

 

[The Turken Lady]

Suspense! what happens next?

I gotta know. lol. Nice story so far.

 

[equinehugger3]

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Lol thanks! I don't have time to write tonight tho