Can I get feedback on my paragraph?

[tabsmonsters]

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Oh, thats just fantastic. Kinda messed up if you really think about it...

 

[tabsmonsters]

Well, that does it. I am going to post each and every assignment on here before I submit it. You all are just fantastic!! Would this be considered cheating? It feels wrong somehow....

 

[Chicken Salad]

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check your parallelism between the singular "skeptic" and the plural "their" and "their."

maybe "bases an informed judgement on these findings" would square that up.

 

[Teach97]

As a teacher I say not wrong to get help and input...having someone else totally write it very wrong...

...unless someone is writing my papers for me then that is totally okay! I hate writing...I would so rather catch an animal

 

[ksacres]

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AH HAH! A hypocrite!

 

[tabsmonsters]

 

[tabsmonsters]

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check your parallelism between the singular "skeptic" and the plural "their" and "their."

maybe "bases an informed judgement on these findings" would square that up.

aha, that sounds better. I had noticed that when I wrote it but I lacked the brains to figure a way around it. thanks!

 

[Teach97]

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No...I live in Oklahoma?

 

[tabsmonsters]

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I think the last time I cheated was in the 7th grade and I felt so bad and couldn't take pride in the grade because I know I didn't earn it.

I just wanted to make sure that if I made some changes that were suggested, I can tell myself it isn't cheating. I am weird. I hate writing as well. I can't come up with any original ideas on my own, at least not very often. I think I would be a great editor, just not on my own writing. If that makes sense.

 

[ksacres]

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No...I live in Oklahoma?