chicken4prez's chat thread! Chicken lovers welcome!!

[chicken4prez]

 Poor girl, I'm so sorry!     I've been having a rough time with BURDZ dying, too.....

I can't get over the beauty in this touching poem......    You're so talented!   And what a kind gesture to write it for Lily during her time of grieving. 

Hey!   I saw it , but haven't responded on your bulletin board yet.   I'm awful about those these days!   

~Amari

Aw. Who?

 

[HeavensHens88]

 
 Well yesterday morning she had a pale comb and she was just standing there. I brought her in the shed and a few hours later she died. 

Show Amari the poem you made, @HeavensHens88
 

 Poor girl, I'm so sorry!     I've been having a rough time with BURDZ dying, too.....

:/ This is so sad, I'm almost regretting I wrote it. It's written from Lily's point of view....

~Moonlight Feathers~
A feather blows in the midnight breeze

And the tears pour down my face

How could this have happened?

How are you no longer in this place?


You were just here-

My Sunshine dear.

You were taken so fast

For it seems just moment or two ago.

That you weren't even near your last.


The time we had was short

Too brief, compared to mortal years

But my little ball of sun

Brightened my life and obliterated my tears.


My hand reaches down to pet your head

Over the roosting bar

My finger grope and flail,

But to no avail

But how can my morning Sun be dead?


My beloved friend

That's what you were

No matter other's viewpoint.

For your shining feathers were to me-

As their dog's fur.


My fingers dance along the box

Where you nested most

I pluck a feather from its depths

And hold it up to the moon's streaming light

It shimmers like a golden moth-

An everlasting ghost.


Candice makes a purring trill

Her eyes half-closed with sleep

Could this precious one

Perhaps live still-

But never quite in your place?


For my Sun will be forever here

Within this moonlit coop

Among the friends and flock she's known

For the fleeting years.

A ray of eternal sun shines in my heart-

A beam of molten moonlight that sets my sobs at ease-

For you, my Sun, will be forever near

As a feather blown by the midnight breeze.
By~ Me.

I can't get over the beauty in this touching poem......    You're so talented!   And what a kind gesture to write it for Lily during her time of grieving. 

Hey, Alex!

Yes. It's been a while. I did post on your profile, but wasn't sure if you posted on mine, as I don't check my profile often. Lol.

Hey!   I saw it , but haven't responded on your bulletin board yet.   I'm awful about those these days!   

~Amari

Awww, thanks, Amari. The more emotion behind it, the better my writing comes out, I've found. I let God take the pen and he's the real Author. So I'm better at writing sad poems, and I thought a commemoration for poor Sunshine to Lily would be nice. Especially since I'm never content with a simple "My sincerest condolences" to someone who has lost a beloved chicken.

 

[TheKindaFarmGal]

Awww, thanks, Amari. The more emotion behind it, the better my writing comes out, I've found. I let God take the pen and he's the real Author. So I'm better at writing sad poems, and I thought a commemoration for poor Sunshine to Lily would be nice. Especially since I'm never content with a simple "My sincerest condolences" to someone who has lost a beloved chicken.

I'm no good with words. *SIGH*

 

[HeavensHens88]

Awww, thanks, Amari. The more emotion behind it, the better my writing comes out, I've found. I let God take the pen and he's the real Author. So I'm better at writing sad poems, and I thought a commemoration for poor Sunshine to Lily would be nice. Especially since I'm never content with a simple "My sincerest condolences" to someone who has lost a beloved chicken.

I'm no good with words. *SIGH*

Wait, wait, wait.
I'm no good with words. *SIGH*
Says the girl who can't join an RP because she writes too much.

 

[TheKindaFarmGal]

Wait, wait, wait.
I'm no good with words. *SIGH*
Says the girl who can't join an RP because she writes to much.

Weeell....

 

[TheKindaFarmGal]

Wait, wait, wait.
I'm no good with words. *SIGH*
Says the girl who can't join an RP because she writes to much.

P. S. Too.

 

[HeavensHens88]

Wait, wait, wait.
I'm no good with words. *SIGH*
Says the girl who can't join an RP because she writes to much.

P. S. Too.

Now I can officially blame eurospell because it's been working overtime this morning.

 

[chicken4prez]

Now I can officially blame eurospell because it's been working overtime this morning.

 

[TheKindaFarmGal]

Now I can officially blame eurospell because it's been working overtime this morning.

 

[HeavensHens88]

Now I can officially blame eurospell because it's been working overtime this morning.

Doth thou not believest me? Though it be shocking, I am doing the foreign thing called serious.