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Very good point Pat! Yes I reread it and pasture and field are indeed redundant. I will incorporate your suggestions!
alicefelldown, yes I can tell.
Thanks for the edits!
It should be relatively apparent. I am not strong in punctuation and grammar. Thankfully, in my years as a product manager, I only needed to toss my two cents in on concept and do technical context editing..
I will be back with revisions...
ON
alicefelldown, yes I can tell.
It should be relatively apparent. I am not strong in punctuation and grammar. Thankfully, in my years as a product manager, I only needed to toss my two cents in on concept and do technical context editing..
I will be back with revisions...
ON
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