grannys gone and done it

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Ohhh that is sad........
 
i would like to read it it really don't matter if it's good or bad as long as you mean it

no such thing as a bad poem cos they come from the heart and i have a feeling
you've a big heart

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Unfortunetly I write when things arent that great... here is one I just found from facebook I wrote years ago.

Why do I feel so clumsy when I'm near you
Why do I say the things that I do
Slip of the tongue, trying to act cool
but when you're around I act like a fool
Clever disguise of shameful need
or an escape from reality, planting the seed
Is it because of my own unhappiness, I just cant think straight
or is there more to it, misleading my fate
I cant continue on the way I have gone
I need to find me-I've been gone for so long
Tormenting soul- I crush all that is good
I sit in my room and look where you have stood
Its not good memories I hold on to
Its pain and scandal, just to get through
I am numb by the discouraged life I have led
I feel no sorrow, no joy, only dread
How do I lift myself up on a cloud
How do I live a life and be proud
Create the truth of what I should see
Think in the positive and let it be
Hold on to hope- view a target and do
Seeing in my minds eye a life that is new.
 
Unfortunetly I write when things arent that great... here is one I just found from facebook I wrote years ago.

Why do I feel so clumsy when I'm near you
Why do I say the things that I do
Slip of the tongue, trying to act cool
but when you're around I act like a fool
Clever disguise of shameful need
or an escape from reality, planting the seed
Is it because of my own unhappiness, I just cant think straight
or is there more to it, misleading my fate
I cant continue on the way I have gone
I need to find me-I've been gone for so long
Tormenting soul- I crush all that is good
I sit in my room and look where you have stood
Its not good memories I hold on to
Its pain and scandal, just to get through
I am numb by the discouraged life I have led
I feel no sorrow, no joy, only dread
How do I lift myself up on a cloud
How do I live a life and be proud
Create the truth of what I should see
Think in the positive and let it be
Hold on to hope- view a target and do
Seeing in my minds eye a life that is new.

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I think its great Linda, so full of raw emotion. I can relate..
 
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