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Ok... This week is revision week.
This means I need you to post problems you have with the story.
1.You need to post questions about what has happened, and tell me if you think I've missed anything, If i have, I need to fix it
2.Please tell me if you think that I put something completely unrelated to the situation in here, because I don't want to have readers think I'm off-topic.
3.Have fun -if you want- fixing my typos, since i'm sure that I must have many by now, and alert me to these.
4.If you think I can do something to make certain parts more emotional... such as relaxed, tension, etc...
Thank you for doing so. (If you do so.)
Please do this!!
This means I need you to post problems you have with the story.
1.You need to post questions about what has happened, and tell me if you think I've missed anything, If i have, I need to fix it
2.Please tell me if you think that I put something completely unrelated to the situation in here, because I don't want to have readers think I'm off-topic.
3.Have fun -if you want- fixing my typos, since i'm sure that I must have many by now, and alert me to these.
4.If you think I can do something to make certain parts more emotional... such as relaxed, tension, etc...
Thank you for doing so. (If you do so.)
Please do this!!
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