in black and white a story about a border collie

[luvinmychickens]

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[luvinmychickens]

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I'm helping her with that... Radio- You may put up my edited version if you would like.

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Thanks luv!

 

[luvinmychickens]

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[ChickenRadio]

chapter 2
When we older, Sam, Blaze, Sara, and I were taken outside and put in a pen. First a red truck came and took Sam, and Blaze, away. Then a black car came and took Sara, away i was the last one there.
Then a gold car came the man in it got out he talked to my owner the picked me up and put me in his car. We drove away from my house we drove for a long time then the car stopped the man got out taking me with him.
in side i was laying on the floor when another dog came up to me i jumped up and moved away from were i was laying "hi." i said shyly "hello." the other dog said.
"what's your name." i asked "spike." was the reply "i'm Lily." i said

 

[luvinmychickens]

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Chapter 2

When we were a bit older, Sam, Blaze, Sara, and I were taken outside and put in a big, nice pen. All of the sudden a red truck came into the driveway. Another man came out and took two of my litter mates away- Sam and Blaze. The car pulled out of the driveway, and soon enough, a black car pulled up. Another big human, took Sara away. I was left in the pen, alone. After a long time that day, a gold car came. The man in it, got out, and talked to my owner. Finally, he picked me up and put me in his car. I wobbled around in the back of the gold car. A long time later, the man got out, picked me up, and carried me to a house.

Inside, I layed on the floor, when another dog approached me. I jumped up quickly from where I was laying, and moved somewhere else. "Hi..." I said to the strange dog shyly.
"Hello!" The strange dog said to me.
"What's your name?" I asked.
"Spike." He replied.
"I'm... Lilly." I told the dog.

 

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[ChickenRadio]

should i post CH 3?

 

[luvinmychickens]

yea