Lies and Deceit - A Fantasy RP

[RiverStorm]

Eva cried out in pain regardless of her not touching his wounds, resting her face against his chest, sobbing into it as he carried her to the spot, her heart beat sporadic and unnatural, eventually getting slower, not finding enough blood to pump through it.

Lucas hurried, he knew she was dying.
When he reached Sparrow`s Rock, it was night. He layed her in the dip, then ran to find some feathers, and soon found six Gold Finch feathers, and layed them on the stones. He stepped back, waiting. Soon she would feel warmth fill her, creeping up her limbs and heal her wounds. And Give her a power. And give her wings- wings of a Gold Finch.
(Is this okay?)

 

[HoodedHuntress]

Lucas hurried, he knew she was dying.
When he reached Sparrow`s Rock, it was night. He layed her in the dip, then ran to find some feathers, and soon found six Gold Finch feathers, and layed them on the stones. He stepped back, waiting. Soon she would feel warmth fill her, creeping up her limbs and heal her wounds. And give her wings- wings of a Gold Finch.
(Is this okay?)

(Sounds good to me, good job XD) As he set her down in the pit, she sobbed in pain with the contact of the floor, thinking he was killing her or perhaps making a sacrifice. Her eyes looked up at his, clear fear in her own. Everything faded. She was dying, she thought. She was dead.

But she could still feel, something crawling on her back or something, it was a strange feeling but one much preferred to than the pain, which had deserted her. Bright light hit her eyes as she awoke, laying limp in the center of the pit, a sign of her knee power, which was unknown to her. She looked around, dazed, not yet able to see the boy who’d helped her. As she sat up, her wings unfolded fully, as if in instinct, revealing the beautiful yellow-gold feathers of a gold finch.

 

[RiverStorm]

(Sounds good to me, good job XD) As he set her down in the pit, she sobbed in pain with the contact of the floor, thinking he was killing her or perhaps making a sacrifice. Her eyes looked up at his, clear fear in her own. Everything faded. She was dying, she thought. She was dead.

But she could still feel, something crawling on her back or something, it was a strange feeling but one much preferred to than the pain, which had deserted her. Bright light hit her eyes as she awoke, laying limp in the center of the pit, a sign of her knee power, which was unknown to her. She looked around, dazed, not yet able to see the boy who’d helped her. As she sat up, her wings unfolded fully, as if in instinct, revealing the beautiful yellow-gold feathers of a gold finch.

(XD I just wasn`t sure if it was decided about a time skip, or if it was okay that there was six stones.)
Lucas stepped down into the pit to show himself. "Are you completely healed?" He asked. "I`ve never done that before. Only learned from the words of others."

 

[HoodedHuntress]

(XD I just wasn`t sure if it was decided about a time skip, or if it was okay that there was six stones.)
Lucas stepped down into the pit to show himself. "Are you completely healed?" He asked. "I`ve never done that before. Only learned from the words of others."

(It’s fine we’re rolling with it now.) Eva didn’t know where he was;everything was still a blur. She nodded, replying on the verge of joyful tears “Yes, I’m completely healed.” As she regained her vision, she ran up to him, embracing him tightly as she cried tears of thankfulness and joy into his shirt. She choked out “Thank you thank you...thank you. I’m indebted to you for life.”

 

[RiverStorm]

(It’s fine we’re rolling with it now.)
Eva didn’t know where he was;everything was still a blur. She nodded, replying on the verge of joyful tears “Yes, I’m completely healed.” As she regained her vision, she ran up to him, embracing him tightly as she cried tears of thankfulness and joy into his shirt. She choked out “Thank you, thank you...thank you. I’m indebted to you for life.”

(K!)
Lucas blushed and patted her on the back, not exactly sure what to do. "It`s fine. I`m just glad you didn`t die." He tipped her head up. "What were you doing out there alone anyway?" His eyes clouded and he stiffened. "You aren`t one of those hunters, are you?"

 

[HoodedHuntress]

(K!)
Lucas blushed and patted her on the back, not exactly sure what to do. "It`s fine. I`m just glad you didn`t die." He tipped her head up. "What were you doing out there alone anyway?" His eyes clouded and he stiffened. "You aren`t one of those hunters, are you?"

Eva looked up him, her own eyes clouded with her tears, before admitting “I came here to see if the Aves were the awful creatures everyone said they were and hunt them. But all the Aves I met were nice. So I chose not to hunt them but to get to know them better.” Two tears rolled down her face as she recalled the Aves who almost killed her, explaining in short, deep breaths “And then he came. He had owl wings, long dark hair, a pistol and knives. Dark brown cloak.” She added in mild terror “He asked me if I could bear the pain..the pain he felt everyday.” She held his gaze before wiping away her tears. She realized embarassedly she probably looked like a mess in front of the handsome Aves. But she was scared and had millions of questions.

 

[RiverStorm]

Eva looked up him, her own eyes clouded with her tears, before admitting “I came here to see if the Aves were the awful creatures everyone said they were and hunt them. But all the Aves I met were nice. So I chose not to hunt them but to get to know them better.” Two tears rolled down her face as she recalled the Aves who almost killed her, explaining in short, deep breaths “And then he came. He had owl wings, long dark hair, a pistol and knives. Dark brown cloak.” She added in mild terror “He asked me if I could bear the pain..the pain he felt everyday.” She held his gaze before wiping away her tears. She realized embarassedly she probably looked like a mess in front of the handsome Aves. But she was scared and had millions of questions.

"I see." Lucas said. "That would have been Horius, a fellow Banished." He cocked his head and looked down at her. "Have any of the Aves you met go by the names, Luna, Persepolis, River, Xylo, Stephen, Eclipsa, or Hector? I mean, if they told you."

 

[Cyprus]

"I see." Lucas said. "That would have been Horius, a fellow Banished." He cocked his head and looked down at her. "Have any of the Aves you met go by the names, Luna, Persepolis, River, Xylo, Stephen, Eclipsa, or Hector? I mean, if they told you."

(Persepolis and Luna never gave their names.)

 

[RiverStorm]

(Persepolis and Luna never gave their names.)

(I know, but Lucas doesn`t.)

 

[Cyprus]

(I know, but Lucas doesn`t.)

(I know. I'm just saying that so the @HoodedHuntress doesn't have Eva give names.)