Mitty - The horse story

Chapter 46

Late afternoon…

My contractions were worsening into painful waves of nausea. I didn't know how much longer I could lie on my side and bear this unbearable pain in my stomach, but I knew that I was getting foal out, somehow I knew; though blinded with pain, I was. The minutes crawled by, I was going mad, my sides were lathered in thick sweat, which mixed with the dust in my coat. I pawed the air with one of my fore hooves, as if it would relieve the pain! Suddenly, in the midst of my writhing, I heard a small yet persistent nicker - high pitched and weak - but it was my baby! I quickly glanced behind me, and saw a wet, dark foal lying in a heap behind me. With a knicker, I rolled to my feet and lovingly licked him clean, I was exhausted and my stomach felt like an overweighted bag, but my new love for this sweet colt overruled everything else.
A half hour later he was clean and dry, yet not standing, which I didn't expect so soon anyways. I lay down beside him to keep him warm, then I gazed at the beautiful evening sky, bright pink clouds were racing across the horizon, tinged with orange, and then violet. The forest was beginning to sound like night, crickets were chirping incessantly, the smell of the earth tinged my nostrils as I sighed happily and closed my eyes; oh so thankful for my new foal.
 
I haven't posted lately, but I am also still waiting for new chapters! I really enjoy this story!
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i absolutely love this story, you are such a great writer, and the detail and wording is just amazing, every chapter it feels like your right there with Mitty through it all, you can see the valley, the sunset, the forest. its very well described. BRAVO
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ok i told you how awesome you are can we have another chapter PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Thanks for posting another chapter.
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I have this story in my bookmarks and check it daily. I used to have a lot more stories I was reading here but that was before the change over. Lots of them have ended already and some were beginning to bore me because people were not posting new chapters for me to read. I need to find the story section on here and see if there are any more that catch my interest.

Sorry for being impatient!
 
I'm working on the next chapter now. It feels so good to be writing again! And writing for the fun of it too! I'm tired of all the essays I've had to do (and I still have more to do :/). I'll post this next chapter sometime today.
 

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