one of my poems. (i added another one, guys!)

[Lunachick]

Your poems are quite good. Let me ask you something...do you feel like you release some of those feelings when you write them? And perhaps feel better afterwards?

 

[newchickowner]

You sure have a talent!! I'm impressed! It is a bit dark, but it's very well written. It seems that maybe you're going through a dark time? Sometimes it's hard to write positive when you're not feeling positive. I look forward to reading your future poems. Like the others, I'd love to read some that are more uplifting. Have you thought about writing songs?

 

[verthandi]

Keep writing Stormhorse...these are very good. My best writing comes when I am dark....when things are "normal" my work is just not as dramatic. It doesn't mean I live on the dark side, it is just the side that I don't let most people see.


Folly


With callous motives
He impaled

Dreams woven
By canard tales

Cankered thoughts
Exposed old wounds

Borne at a time
When trust was new


Verthandi 6/20/07

 

[lacyloo]

beautiful poes, storm chick

 

[Stormhorse23]

thanks guys. ill post more later on. sorry they are a little dark, but im kind of a dark person and its how i express myself.

 

[ilovemychickies]

Great poems, Stormhorse! Here's one that I made. It's not very good though.

Nature
Listen to nature,
it's all around you.
From the tweet of a bird,
to the wind through the leaves.
The joys of nature never leave,
there're always there, ready to please.
Most things in the world come and pass,
But the wonders of nature will always last.

 

[Stormhorse23]

Quote:
its great. why cant i do happier things like that??? guess well never know. try to make it flow more. how old are you, anyway?

 

[ilovemychickies]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I just thought it up in about 5 minutes. I'm (age edited by staff for internet safety)

 

[Stormhorse23]

Thats great. your very mature ! A really good way to get started on a piece of writing is to go outside and just sit for an hour. I love winter nights in the barn and watching the bats.

 

[Cheekon]

Modern day Edger Allen Poe?