Photo Critique Club

[TheOddOneOut]

Crop it. Tightly. The wire is a major distraction and the closer you get in on her face the more detail will emerge.

Like this?

 

[TheOddOneOut]

Completely unedited shot. Another cute pullet. Suggestions? I think I need to crop so her face isn’t in the center.

 

[azurbanclucker]

Like this? View attachment 3162841

Yes. You might even go vertical with this one and slice off more of the left. Depends on if it helps or not. You definitely see more detail even in this crop.

 

[azurbanclucker]

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Completely unedited shot. Another cute pullet. Suggestions? I think I need to crop so her face isn’t in the center.

This one's just not great composition unfortunately. You need more of her or less of her and less background. Her neck arch makes her look deformed and all that buff in the corner unbalances the shot. Try cropping it so that you' slice off the top and right hand sides, pulling her more up and right in the shot. I'm not sure that's the answer but I think it'll help. The right answer is frame her up a bit more in future shots so you have more of her to work with.

 

[Fuchsia]

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What would y’all do with this? I don’t remembering editing it at all, but it’s another one from a few years ago. It’s the same pullet as this photo: View attachment 3162810

I think that one is pretty good..
I played around with it just for fun, I'm very new to editing so it's not great but this is what I did to it

 

[TheOddOneOut]

I think that one is pretty good..
I played around with it just for fun, I'm very new to editing so it's not great but this is what I did to it
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That’s good. I don’t like what it did to her eye however. I’ll play around with it and see what I can do without lightening the whole image.

 

[TheOddOneOut]

This one's just not great composition unfortunately. You need more of her or less of her and less background. Her neck arch makes her look deformed and all that buff in the corner unbalances the shot. Try cropping it so that you' slice off the top and right hand sides, pulling her more up and right in the shot. I'm not sure that's the answer but I think it'll help.

Good to know.

The right answer is frame her up a bit more in future shots so you have more of her to work with.

Well, she’s dead now, so…
Yeah, when she was young she had quite the neck. It was hard to photograph her. Let me find some of the other ones. Her lanky-ness really showed.

 

[TheOddOneOut]

Good to know.

Well, she’s dead now, so…
Yeah, when she was young she had quite the neck. It was hard to photograph her. Let me find some of the other ones. Her lanky-ness really showed.

She manages to look deformed here too.

 

[TheOddOneOut]

She was very pretty though.

 

[azurbanclucker]

She manages to look deformed here too. View attachment 3162875

"I am thumbelina! Bawk Bawk!"

Sorry she's gone