Photo Critique Club

[TheOddOneOut]

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What would y’all do with this? I don’t remembering editing it at all, but it’s another one from a few years ago. It’s the same pullet as this photo:

I think I want to lighten up her face, but am not sure how.

 

[TheOddOneOut]

A different photo, a different pullet; comments?

I know she’s looking through the wire, but her face is in focus - and the detail is captured very well, right down to her chipped beak. I think it makes quite the interesting shot, though it wouldn’t win any contests. How can I improve it?

 

[PippinTheChicken]

I can't believe I didn't find this earlier...

Thoughts?

 

[TheOddOneOut]

I can't believe I didn't find this earlier...

Thoughts?


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Her eye is weird. That’s my thoughts.

 

[TheOddOneOut]

This one is cute. I captured a funny moment pretty well.

She was taking a blueberry from my cousin.

 

[azurbanclucker]

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I know she’s looking through the wire, but her face is in focus - and the detail is captured very well, right down to her chipped beak. I think it makes quite the interesting shot, though it wouldn’t win any contests. How can I improve it?

Crop it. Tightly. The wire is a major distraction and the closer you get in on her face the more detail will emerge.

 

[EmmaRainboe]

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I know she’s looking through the wire, but her face is in focus - and the detail is captured very well, right down to her chipped beak. I think it makes quite the interesting shot, though it wouldn’t win any contests. How can I improve it?

The wire obviously makes this not a great photo, but I think it looks pretty cool in grayscale with a heavy vignette

 

[PippinTheChicken]

Her eye is weird. That’s my thoughts.

Oh yes, they're beautiful arent they?

 

[azurbanclucker]

I can't believe I didn't find this earlier...

Thoughts?


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Compositionally the bottom one is better but you missed the focus point slightly. Should be her eye instead of her nostril.

 

[casportpony]

This one looks a little over-exposed , and I don't like that most of her body is cut off.

I like this one.