Cardinalflutter saw Cougarpounce's handsome golden eyes fire up in exasperation, and quickly said, "Alright," she mewed, "Dawnpaw you can go now. And then Cougarpounce and I will critic you both with tips for avoiding mistakes and perfecting techniques." She mewed pointedly before Cougarpounce could point out Beetlepaw's mistakes.
Deerkit is a she-cat!
Beetlepaw nodded.
(Ok, that's fine.
I only was explaining something rather confusing that I said.)
Dawnpaw paused taking in all the scents of the forest. She caught the scent of a vole. Pinpointing the exact area it was, She crept towards the tree. Spotting the shrew she tensed ready to pounce and leaped on to the tiny mammal delivering a killing bite.
(Mapleclan)
"Have you not the ability to comprehend who that burn was directed towards?" Coldshard said. "You."
When Deerkit turned at last to face her sister there was no trace of tears, not in her eyes or even no sign of fear in her quivering whispers. Deerkit's eyes were narrowed, rigid, cold, hard slits. "Only the strongest survive," she said. "So I know what that makes you," Deerkit paused, "Dead." And with a murderous stare, Deerkit and Magpiekit turned and stalked off.
"Nice catch." Cardinalflutter mewed. "There's still a couple things you need to work on though. I'm going to take you to the training hollow where I can help you with your hunting skills better on the open ground. Cougarpounce, I'll leave you to help Beetlepaw." She nodded to him and turned. She didn't want Dawnpaw hearing what Beetlepaw needed improving on.
Sparrowpaw was unsure what he meant by 'burn'. But she did know one thing. This tom had just insulted her to her face, even after she had given him a second chance. She hissed, her ears laid back against her head and her eyes flaring with a seemingly sudden anger. "You're a Forestclanner, I can tell by your stench." She growled, getting more and more agitated as she stared at his smug face. Some small part of her was telling her to shut up, but Sparrowpaw didn't care. "So why don't you take your big, clumsy paws and run back to the forest, where you mud-furs belong?" She spat, her tail lashing.
It took every bit of self-control for Magpiekit not to burst out with mrows of laughter. Of course. She thought. Deerkit will throw out the "Only the strongest survive," when she can't think of anything else to say. It's so embarrassing having such an idiotic weirdo for a sister. And over her shoulder she mewed, barely concealing her laughter, though her eyes betrayed everything, "You're right there, Deerkit," she said through barely suppressed laughter, "I am dying, from laughter, because you're so mousebrained. It's just incredible, here you are practically drooling over your precious phrase "Only the strongest survive," and I finally had to realize you're too dimwitted to realize it so obviously excludes you."
