~Temptation~ My New Book!

[DuckLover2399]

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[DuckLover179]

“Ready to go?” Josh asked, walking up.

I looked up at him with tear filled eyes. “No.” I muttered.

“What happened?” He asked, his voice slightly annoyed.

“Child Services took my brother…” I sobbed, resting my head on my knees.

Josh rolled his eyes. “All you’ve done is complain. Maybe you could come to dinner, and actually try to have fun!?” He said, motioning to a dark green truck parked in the driveway.

I wiped away my tears, and stood up. “You’re right.” I sighed, walking to the truck.

Josh smirked “I know.” He said, getting in the drivers seat.

I opened the passenger door, and hopped in. “So, where are we going?” I asked.

Josh shrugged. “We’ll drive around and look.” He said, pulling out of the driveway.

I nodded “Okay…” I sighed, looking out the window.

We drove around for a bit until Josh pulled the car into a McDonald’s parking lot.

“We’re here.” He said, jumping out of the truck, and running inside.

I sat in the truck, shocked for a moment. “Oh, umm… Okay.” I mumbled, slowly following him.

Josh ordered two burgers, and we took our seats. “So, how’s school going?” I asked.

“Okay, I guess. Hey look, Kristen’s throwing a huge party tonight. I thought maybe we could go?” He said, looking excited.

“Oh…” I sighed. I wasn’t read to go to a party after losing my brother. “Yeah, sounds fun!” I said.

“Great!” He said.

The employee called our number, and I stood to get our food. “Thanks!” I told her, taking the tray back to our table. Josh inhaled his burger within seconds. I laughed, and soon finished mine.

“Ready to go?” He asked, noticing I had finished.

I nodded. “Yup!” I said.
We got back into the truck, and headed out for Kristen’s party.

Once we arrived, I stepped out of the truck and walked in the door, which was wide open. There were kids drinking. It reminded me of Jenna’s party.

“Oh, hey Cally!” Kristen said when Josh and I walked in.

“Hi!” I said.

“Go to the back of the house.” She said, pointing down a hall.

“Why?” I asked.

“Just do it!” She smiled.

I nodded, and left Josh at the party while I walked down the hall. It was small, and dark. I finally found a lit up room at the end, and opened the door. There I found Jenna.

“Hey, Cally!” She called.

I stared at her, stunned. She was getting a tattoo. “Are you… Okay?!” I asked, walking up to her.

“Totally fine! You’re getting one next!” She squealed.

 

[DuckyGurl]

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PLEASE!
You are a great author! The part where he takes her to McDonald's made me LOL! OMgosh, what a dingbat!

 

[DuckLover2399]

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I know I was laughing so harrd

 

[DuckLover179]

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Yeah, I wasn't really sure where to have him take her, and I needed to make him sound like a jerk.

Thanks! I'll work on the next part.

And it's nice to see you back, DG!

 

[DuckyGurl]

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Yeah, I wasn't really sure where to have him take her, and I needed to make him sound like a jerk.

Thanks! I'll work on the next part.

And it's nice to see you back, DG!

Awesome.
It tis nice to be back! But it was nice to get away for a while, KWIM?

 

[DuckLover179]

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Yeah, I wasn't really sure where to have him take her, and I needed to make him sound like a jerk.

Thanks! I'll work on the next part.

And it's nice to see you back, DG!

Awesome.
It tis nice to be back! But it was nice to get away for a while, KWIM?

Yeah. I took a small break to read the bible, start my blog, etc. And it really is nice to take a break every once in a while.

 

[DuckyGurl]

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Awesome.
It tis nice to be back! But it was nice to get away for a while, KWIM?

Yeah. I took a small break to read the bible, start my blog, etc. And it really is nice to take a break every once in a while.

Well, I was on vacation with no access to a 'puter...so that solved it!

But the stopping RPing really helped me grow closer to God. Otherwise, I was SO BUSY!

 

[DuckLover179]

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Yeah. I took a small break to read the bible, start my blog, etc. And it really is nice to take a break every once in a while.

Well, I was on vacation with no access to a 'puter...so that solved it!

But the stopping RPing really helped me grow closer to God. Otherwise, I was SO BUSY!

Nice!

That's really awesome!

 

[DuckyGurl]

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Well, I was on vacation with no access to a 'puter...so that solved it!

But the stopping RPing really helped me grow closer to God. Otherwise, I was SO BUSY!

Nice!

That's really awesome!

Yup. BTW, I love your blog!